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Day 10 - The Big Date

As Dr. Whooves woke up on the tenth day, he checked his Diary.
He decided that he felt better enough, and alot less crazy, that he would go and visit Derpy.
Not without breakfast first, he decided to cook himself eggs as he was feeling an eggy kind of mood.

As he finished his eggs, he decided to make a smoothie, that is what he did.
He unloaded some caramel, chocolate, blueberries, vanilla flavour and milk into the smoothie machine, pressing the "Smoothify" button.

As he finished drinking his deliciousness, he decided it was time to man up and go see Derpy.
It was bad enough that he made her cry, he must confess his love for her.

So Dr. Whooves set out for the jewelry store, located nearby.
If he was going to confess his love, he needed to do it right.

As he arrived, he ran inside and used all his Bits for an engagement ring.
He then quickly set off for Derpy's house, knowing that love was in his heart.

As he reached Derpy's house, he knocked on the door.
He quickly got down to one knee (Can ponies do that?) and Derpy opened the door.

Derpy noticed Dr. Whooves at the door and was about to close the door when she saw it...
A sparkling diamond ring, she was shocked.
"Derpy, will you marry me?" was all that Dr. Whooves asked.
She pulled him inside and kissed him, "Yes!" she yelled.

A wild day of snuggling ensued.

Author's Note:

Now that was certainly a big day.

Hopefully you enjoyed this fimfiction and I hope to see you, the reader, on another story, maybe?

Well as always, constructive criticism is always wanted, accepted and appreciated.

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Sergeant Snuggles

Sergeant Snuggles #1 · Dec 18th, 2014 · · ·

5395872

I didn't know that it had been done already, sorry.

Anima Reaper

Anima Reaper #2 · Dec 18th, 2014 · · ·

5395872 dude that was a little harsh don't you think

Exelzior

Exelzior #3 · Dec 23rd, 2014 · 1 · ·

5395872
Well, I hope you go around telling every new writer this. Every story on this site has probably been done to death in some way, shape or form, so don't go around flapping your jaw unless you're also planning to do it on every shipfic that isn't using an original coupling that no one's tried before.

Also, and this is just me, but maybe try and have a few OWN STORIES written before you go and bash someone else's work. At least this user has a story out, whereas looking at your profile I can't find a single written chapter so far, so maybe dial back on the criticism a little, would ya? Oh, and when you do put something out there, please, make sure it's a completely original idea that has never been done at any single point, and you'll see how easy it is.

Sergeant Snuggles