A method actor is changed and sent to Equestria as Kira Yoshikage. Stuck in the role he dressed as, can he keep himself from falling into his character's serial killer habits and survive the craziness that seems to be attracted to him?
WHOO-HOO! Kira Yoshikage is BACK! This is really「great!」And I love the contrast you make between Kira and Jonathan. It's actually quite fascinating.
Though, for the long run, I can't imagine Kira actually wanting to do anything bad. In case you haven't noticed, he doesn't like hooves. By your own admission, there's no reason for him to kill anyone. I suspect you'll find a way around that.
But not the minotaurs. Please, God, not the minotaurs.
Luckily I read part 4 about 8 months ago so I SHOULD be okay. Probably have forgotten some stuff, but hey! Still read it through, and ready to read on!
I don't think I can continue with this story. I kept track of this story because it was one of the only Jojo crossovers that looked decent, but now that the fourth chapter's out, I'm not so sure anymore. I couldn't get through the dream scene because it didn't feel natural. There was too much exposition that was too straight forward. You could've taken this opportunity to flesh out the MC, maybe given some of his backstory. As an author, you need to write with more subtly, be more sneaky with what you're saying. Show, don't tell.
Man, I'm loving this! Great chapter, I do hope you'll update this more, especially with the anime now getting to Kira. Great job, keep goin and stay golden^^
7148814 I suppose the minotaurs might be possible targets, then again he desires the "slender digits" of human hands and while minos have hands, I doubt they are as slender as he'd like to have, even on the females.
7677459 I'm not even sure if Jonathan ever came to be the leading party in a battle considering his utter inexperience when it comes to using a Stand (though maybe it comes naturally with changing into Kira since DIO and Jotaro probably used their stands as well) but when push comes to shove, KQ will maybe listen to both? That or Jonathan may develop a whole new stand for himself.
Edit: I redact my statement about Diavolo since Epitaph is just a sub-stand of King Crimson so that statement would not hold true unless you actually think about giving Jonathan control over Sheer Heart Attack while Kira controls Killer Queen, that would be similar to Doppio and Diavolo. But then again, it wouldn't work with Killer Queen because both Sheer Heart Attack and Killer Queen Bites The Dust are automatic stands without any real control over. It'd more be like Jonathan controlling Stray Cat but we haven't even seen a trace of that thing so that might just be some nonsense I'm spouting.
7734179 If you don't mind, I have a few questions regarding that. For one, are Stand Arrows going to be anywhere in Equestria? Also, is Jonathan/Kira's friend who was cosplaying as Kosaku Kira going to end up in Equestria as well? And if Kosaku Kira DOES show up, is Bites The Dust going to be used at all?
I'll be honest, I have glossed over this story many times because I thought the premise was lame and cringe worthy. But then I considered who you are and how much I enjoy the adventures you write about Gilgamesh, so I decided you deserved the benefit of the doubt and gave it a shot.
I'm very glad I did.
This story completely and utterly exceeded my expectations. Your characterization of Yoshikage Kira is excellent and I look forward to seeing more.
WHOO-HOO! Kira Yoshikage is BACK! This is really「great!」And I love the contrast you make between Kira and Jonathan. It's actually quite fascinating.
Though, for the long run, I can't imagine Kira actually wanting to do anything bad. In case you haven't noticed, he doesn't like hooves. By your own admission, there's no reason for him to kill anyone. I suspect you'll find a way around that.
But not the minotaurs. Please, God, not the minotaurs.
Luckily I read part 4 about 8 months ago so I SHOULD be okay. Probably have forgotten some stuff, but hey! Still read it through, and ready to read on!
I don't think I can continue with this story. I kept track of this story because it was one of the only Jojo crossovers that looked decent, but now that the fourth chapter's out, I'm not so sure anymore. I couldn't get through the dream scene because it didn't feel natural. There was too much exposition that was too straight forward. You could've taken this opportunity to flesh out the MC, maybe given some of his backstory. As an author, you need to write with more subtly, be more sneaky with what you're saying. Show, don't tell.
7387024 um... Don't what?
Man, I'm loving this! Great chapter, I do hope you'll update this more, especially with the anime now getting to Kira. Great job, keep goin and stay golden^^
This is a fantastic story. Definitely going to be one of my absolute favorites. Out of curiosity, when can we expect the next chapter to come out?
So I can't help but get mind locked on two things.
If Kira and sanders fight who does killer queen listen too?
Also
Mirror portal. There is no way that can be ignored.
7734162 I'll confirm one thing, Jonathan/Kira does not currently possess Bites the Dust.
7148814 I suppose the minotaurs might be possible targets, then again he desires the "slender digits" of human hands and while minos have hands, I doubt they are as slender as he'd like to have, even on the females.
7677459 I'm not even sure if Jonathan ever came to be the leading party in a battle considering his utter inexperience when it comes to using a Stand (though maybe it comes naturally with changing into Kira since DIO and Jotaro probably used their stands as well) but when push comes to shove, KQ will maybe listen to both? That or Jonathan may develop a whole new stand for himself.
Edit: I redact my statement about Diavolo since Epitaph is just a sub-stand of King Crimson so that statement would not hold true unless you actually think about giving Jonathan control over Sheer Heart Attack while Kira controls Killer Queen, that would be similar to Doppio and Diavolo. But then again, it wouldn't work with Killer Queen because both Sheer Heart Attack and Killer Queen Bites The Dust are automatic stands without any real control over. It'd more be like Jonathan controlling Stray Cat but we haven't even seen a trace of that thing so that might just be some nonsense I'm spouting.
7734179 If you don't mind, I have a few questions regarding that. For one, are Stand Arrows going to be anywhere in Equestria? Also, is Jonathan/Kira's friend who was cosplaying as Kosaku Kira going to end up in Equestria as well? And if Kosaku Kira DOES show up, is Bites The Dust going to be used at all?
Wow, this is actually REALLY good!
I'll be honest, I have glossed over this story many times because I thought the premise was lame and cringe worthy. But then I considered who you are and how much I enjoy the adventures you write about Gilgamesh, so I decided you deserved the benefit of the doubt and gave it a shot.
I'm very glad I did.
This story completely and utterly exceeded my expectations. Your characterization of Yoshikage Kira is excellent and I look forward to seeing more.
MOAR!!
Great story so far, i'm really enjoyng the story.
I have no clue why but this made me laugh more than it probably should have because I feel like that's something Kira would say.
Something tells me this will not be as a simple as it seems...
Chew...
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Instant fave comment.
If diavolo appeared I doubt any of them would even know he existed