That actually reminds me of an idea a friend once had. In that, Sunset discovers that her demonic posession left her with a hunger for lust and admiration, that affects her physically. If she does not get a certain amount of those emotions (which she has to do so sexually) , her metabolism shuts down in a way similiar to someone who has low sugar. Part of her finding out that her problem is of magical nature includes, that she finds herself hypnotizing someone by accident into pleasuring her and realizing that she grows fangs during those moments. The idea was that Sunset obviously tries to find a way to get rid of the condition, but as time goes by, she more or less adjusts to it, enslaving/falling in love with a bunch of students (including of course the mane 5, who in parts fall for her on their own accord) and a few slip ups aside (e.g using her power to make a bunch of bullies embarass themselves sexually for bullying Fluttershy) she tries to keep her morals. so in short, a mind control/corruption/harem story with the enslavement/rape aspects being significantly toned down when compared to other people's work.
I don't know in which direction this one will go, but so far it looks okay. And I hope to see something similiar to what my friend tought of in parts, as I always thought those ideas had potential.
PS: If I may suggest one thing: If your story includes the Sirens down the line, how about making tem try to corrupt Sunset to gain her succubi powers (as they are similiar to theirs), only to end up as docile addition to a harem? Convincing them they will also be adored if they are just happy little slaves to her mistress
Not bad at all. Lust for power, power to control minds, that's exactly how Sunset was in the first movie and certainly sounds like a succubus. It makes sense that she gained her powers from one., I presume by calling on those powers using the Element of Magic. This should be a very interesting story.
Yeah, I don't want to bring in a lot of negative crap, this is probably going to keep to a more positive feel, and focus on those themes of enlightenment and discovery I was exploring in A Thin Line.
I think Rainbow Rocks showed, more than anything, that Sunset Shimmer is an excellent character for storytelling. Relatable and cool in an interesting way, she captures this sense of breakable, yet unbroken spirit that feels really human. She's surrounded by opportunities and power at every turn, and I want to explore what it's like to be presented with such things, and what effects those have on the status quo.
Glad to see your silly avatar again! Sorry about the confusing hiatus limbo of "A Thin Line," I guess I lost interest in that story. I always knew I should have just kept it to the original vision of 3 chapters, but I got carried away by the story's success and had to keep adding more, until eventually I ran out of room because the original premise wasn't built to sustain something like that.
It'll probably never get finished at this rate, unfortunately, but I'm glad people enjoyed it, and I'm thankful that there's still a place for my writing style among all the fics we have now. I can only hope that people will enjoy this story half as much.
Behold the first ever Sunset Harem fic. And please for the love of Molestia add Sonata to the harem, because she is the best siren,
That actually reminds me of an idea a friend once had. In that, Sunset discovers that her demonic posession left her with a hunger for lust and admiration, that affects her physically. If she does not get a certain amount of those emotions (which she has to do so sexually) , her metabolism shuts down in a way similiar to someone who has low sugar. Part of her finding out that her problem is of magical nature includes, that she finds herself hypnotizing someone by accident into pleasuring her and realizing that she grows fangs during those moments.
The idea was that Sunset obviously tries to find a way to get rid of the condition, but as time goes by, she more or less adjusts to it, enslaving/falling in love with a bunch of students (including of course the mane 5, who in parts fall for her on their own accord) and a few slip ups aside (e.g using her power to make a bunch of bullies embarass themselves sexually for bullying Fluttershy) she tries to keep her morals.
so in short, a mind control/corruption/harem story with the enslavement/rape aspects being significantly toned down when compared to other people's work.
I don't know in which direction this one will go, but so far it looks okay. And I hope to see something similiar to what my friend tought of in parts, as I always thought those ideas had potential.
PS: If I may suggest one thing: If your story includes the Sirens down the line, how about making tem try to corrupt Sunset to gain her succubi powers (as they are similiar to theirs), only to end up as docile addition to a harem? Convincing them they will also be adored if they are just happy little slaves to her mistress
this is genius. Pure genius. I applaud you sir. It is also rather humorous. Have a like and a favorite.
Not bad at all. Lust for power, power to control minds, that's exactly how Sunset was in the first movie and certainly sounds like a succubus. It makes sense that she gained her powers from one., I presume by calling on those powers using the Element of Magic. This should be a very interesting story.
This was a pleasant surprise. Clop with a story is always appreciated in my book and you're exceptional at it!
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Yeah, I don't want to bring in a lot of negative crap, this is probably going to keep to a more positive feel, and focus on those themes of enlightenment and discovery I was exploring in A Thin Line.
I think Rainbow Rocks showed, more than anything, that Sunset Shimmer is an excellent character for storytelling. Relatable and cool in an interesting way, she captures this sense of breakable, yet unbroken spirit that feels really human. She's surrounded by opportunities and power at every turn, and I want to explore what it's like to be presented with such things, and what effects those have on the status quo.
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Glad to see your silly avatar again! Sorry about the confusing hiatus limbo of "A Thin Line," I guess I lost interest in that story. I always knew I should have just kept it to the original vision of 3 chapters, but I got carried away by the story's success and had to keep adding more, until eventually I ran out of room because the original premise wasn't built to sustain something like that.
It'll probably never get finished at this rate, unfortunately, but I'm glad people enjoyed it, and I'm thankful that there's still a place for my writing style among all the fics we have now. I can only hope that people will enjoy this story half as much.
I've been watching waaay too many Michael Rosen Youtube Poops
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I teach little girls to be....
really good."