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(i started to write in the middle of the story, if something isn´t true it is because of that)
I don´t remember how often Twilight met Trixie already, but sometimes i get the feeling even Twilight have to respect privacy, or if someone don´t like her. I now Princes of friendship, but maybe that don´t have to mean that everyone have to like her, some regard for her could be enough as well i think.
Sorry, this is not because of your story, well the first part is about your story, but i wanted to say something about other fanfictions i read.
Let´s just say your story remind me of those things.
Sometimes it is like Cadance or Twilight have to demand from other ponys, that they love each other or be friends, i mean it is not like they would die if somepony don´t make the right choise or want someone as a friend. I am not sure how much of such fanfictions i have read, but sometimes i want to be a bit more realistic about them i think, if i can say it like that. (don´t mind me, i start to search for a reason again, i mean because i am not sure why this is so important for me again.)
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I honestly don´t know why i am happy after the end of that chapter, but i am. Maybe i liked it that Twilight didn´t got what she wanted for once, or at least not that easy. I know your probably not the first one who did that, but it was somehow an interessting situation.
I don´t know how to say this, but i think i would like it if Twilight could not get Applejack as her Marefriend even if she want it.
What i mean is, of course i expect a little disaster about Applejacks hate for Fillyfooler and a fight between her and her friends, but even if Applejack can tolerate the idea, i think she should not suddenly be a Filly fooler as well. I think i want a sad moment, and a happy end with them being friends, i think i never saw how a relationship doesn´t worked out between them.
edit : I forgot what i still wanted to say, but i really like the whole situation with Applejack, it is an interessting point of the story at the moment. I was a bit suprised about karate Trixie, but......yeaaaahhhh my dislike in the first second changed into fascination i guess.
Befor i stop to make any sense, i want to say you that i am as happy as always to have another good and interessting Chapter.
That can't be appetizing.
5516178 You'd be surprised it's actually good. flavored yes but it's actually not that bad. Did you like karate Trixie as Texus called her?
5515853 I think i follow. I never liked that friendships were made so easily either. Discord being the most prominent. I feel a more subtle or heartbreaking approach is more interesting than simply shoving two together. However I admit, I did do that with Trixie and Mary but that's OK once in a while. It's their story after all. I realize I don't put them together too often but I'm changing that next chapter. As for karate Trixie, that's something the Pie family had to do with, or at least somepony in the family.
cough cough maud....
Ironically I wanted Twilight to not get Applejacks hate of fillyfooling but I realized from boast busters, Trixies first major appearance, that she too self conscious of her friends feelings regarding her. So I feel she reacted appropriately to Applejack giving the circumstances.
So, Twilight likes Applejack, but Applejack hates same-sex relationships. I feel bad for Twilight, and really hate Applejack right now. I'm sure Big Mac doesn't feel the same way (hence the glare). I hope Applejack gets some type of wake-up call.
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i have to ask again, because once in a while i am not sure with my understanding from english.
You mean, that you wanted Twilight not to know about Applejacks hate for Filly foolers right? If i am right, then i think i understand the rest as well.
So i guess that would be a spoiler, but i am not sure if that measn that Twilight and Applejack are not a possible shipping here.
even if it isn´t the worst possible thing, i am glad to know that someone thinks the same thing about one issue.
only to be sure.....i like karate Trixie Honestly i am happy for everything that helps to let Trixie not look that weak, as some of the ponys may think. Nothing against Twilight, but sometimes the way Twilight have to act in any story, is odd in some ways, but i think we had that talk already i only start to defend Trixie again, i am curious if she started to be my favourite Pony, maybe even more than Fluttershy.
Yeah from the boast busters episode and one or two storys, i started to think that Trixie just acted in her show like she had to, yes she had overdone it a bit, but if i remember it right, the main six where those, which accepted every Challenge, i thinK Rarity even started her Challenge. Trixie did more or less nothing else than beating them in the challenge.
I am interessted in the fact, that it seems like we could question the lesson Twilight learned in that episode, with the fact that they maybe had to bedevil Trixie in some way. (I am glad if i that sentence made sense, but i think i can stop here, my usual "Trixie is not only bad" talk is over for now.
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Someday. But not today.
LOL perhaps she ill, but maybe she won't. I'm not sure. I don't like stories that are all rainbows and sunshine. Wonderbolt my Heart will be a sad story from beginning to end but maybe I'll make an exception for this one.
So I'm not the only author crazy enough to write Trixie as a martial artist?
Sorry it took me this long to catch up with your story, mate, but must knkw hat I'm loving it.
6217041 That's fine. I honestly had forgotten you even liked this one. I lost so many readers from this story cause to the strong views Applejack and other shave in this story that I can't even keep count.
Still glad you're still on board with it.
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Meh, as long a there's a good characterization, a character's position shouldn't bother the reader.
Anyways, I'll try to read it full before the end of the week.
Forgot the starting quotation mark
I just thought about it but everyone cries REALLY easy.