Every year, Princess Celestia makes a very long trip. This is the one day she takes a day off. Nopony under any circumstance is granted clearance to her private chambers, after all they would only find a dead mare. It's not so much the pain of dying, rather the pain of not giving into a temptation which makes her journey so long. This is the tale of the real challenge, Celestia faces every year.
interesting story. Found a few of the dreaded typos. Will track to see what happens.
The reason why she was able the defeat [to]?
The beings face had nor fur [no]
but coming down here never gets apart easier." [ some words left out ???]
"How do you know it's not up?" [what's not up ]
sane thing a pony would do I this situation; [in]
Needs,
1. indents.
2. Less capitalization.
3. Correction of some really weird errors...
5355471 Thanks for pointing out the errors. I was up quite late.
5356770
No prob bro it happens