Trigger warning: You clicked the story after seeing the cover art, you're on your own from here on out.

Aaaaand my expectations have plummeted like a stunned pigeon off the Empire State Building.

5297847 Would you rather I changed it?

5297851 I'd be absolutely and totally thrilled if you let us know what we were getting into. Not because I'm against any particular fetish, but because it lets me know what to expect, besides mediocre writing. :3

5297913 I see, I'll get right on that.

I agree with this ship.

5298142 Tis a darn shame it's so rare, this is why this exists.

Oh mah gaad dis story bruh! Dis story! This was an very good read, pacing was good, grammar was good, and it was interesting! Damn you don't find story's that have this umph anymore. I liked how you wrote Macintosh it seemed similar to the show. Well in the end this was one of my favorites for tonight and will probably come back later to read it again.

Keep up the good work man! Or woman!

Sincerely: Ernest

5298179 Man, and thank you. But I can not take all the credit, Waffles did the majority of the editing.

5298184 Oh didn't know that, well then you sir are a horrible writer... Just kiddin! Keep it up man the story was great and I believe you and Waffles can make magic if ya'll keep goin. Also Waffles may have done most of the editing but who came up with the story?

"Never stop writing because if you stop you'll never know what you could've been."
-Ernest Wood (A.K.A Shark Tits)

Have a good night or day man. Peace.

Nicely written story. I like it. Hope I could write as nearly as good as that soon.

5298152

BTW, who made that coverart? I wanna know 'cause it's really . . . nice. [eyebrow wiggling intensifies]

5298617 The source is in the desc.

Totally worth it, I 100 percent like this.

It's funny how many don't know what a trigger warning is

5301030 Hm?

The picture is what caught my attention. I'm glad that it did. Nice work. Liked and Fav'ed.

This is a good story, keep up the good work and have a nice day!!

I want another chapter

5302383 Alas, it would require a sequel and the dark forces to summon Editor Waffles once again.

But it was so short and sweet. I crave more.

5302403 Maybe I might make a sequel, but I have to discuss it with my editor.

My cravings are not fixed,
I expect more,
Lest I call this a bore.

~OreoKookie

5302804 Relax, a bonus chapter is in the works.

5303376
Oh, that is,
Awesome! Thank you so much!

~OreoKookie

5297913

Trigger warnings? You wiiiimp.

But I do agree with one thing he says: this writing is a bland as oatmeal. Totally a buzzkill.

Would have been a pretty good one aside from that.

~Skeeter The Lurker

5304791 It's your opinion, others like it while others don't.

Potions are triggers?

5308854 You'd be surprised.

Dear Seth.

I'll level with you, this fic started out with a couple strikes (none of them the fics fault int eh slightest) one, it's almost 2 in the morning, 2 (he he) I'm sleepy, and three, Zecora isn't my favorite pony(but Big Mac is). Let's move on, despite my utter fickleness, this managed to put quite the smile on my face I have to say. You manage to balance a rather sweet story, with some relatively hot clop. Well done my good sir.

Sincerely Yours, The Cake Devil.

5311032 Glad you enjoyed it, hopefully the extra chapter won't change your opinion. (Reader demands y'know...)

5311314
Dear Seth
Eh, not my place to complain. Would I like to see the two on a romantic date, yes. Do I want to see the adorable Zebra/Pony hybrid that could possible spawn from this ship, also yes. Do I expect to see these, nope (more the second one). My problem with one off clop fics is that I'm almost always left wanting more. Either way, you earned my like, and it's going to take quite the jump for me to take that away.

Yours Truly, The Cake Devil.

5311853 I know the feeling of wanting more, like a delicious burrito you want to regenerate infinitely for eternal satisfaction.

5311951
Dear Seth.

Agreed. But tis not fair to ask a man for what can only be provided by the powerful burrito gods. Just as it not fair to ask for a continuation of a story of this one shot, into a full on romance. Not saying it wouldn't be interesting, just saying it's a little like a one night stand that hasn't gone home come morning, not that I'd know anything about that...I'm so lonley Ahem. Anyways, if it works out then it works out, if it doesn't, so be it.

Yours Truly, The Cake Devil.

5312016 Yep.

5312030

Anyways, didn't mean to talk your ear off there, have a wonderful day, and keep up the wonderful work!

Yours very Truly, The Cake Devil.

It is great, there is not a single thing I can berate!

Oh my goodness! This was simply lovely. It reminds me of how I met my fiance. I hope to see more of this.

I absolutely loved this, will there be more?

5321750 you met your fiancee because of ED problems?

The potions effects are interesting isn’t it

I think you meant to say "the potion's effects, aren't they" or "the potion's effect is interesting, isn't it" I noticed a few other little mistakes, but this was first among them, I'm point it out because the wording didn't make sense to me. I enjoyed the story more than I thought I would.

Okay chapter, but there's a couple of minor things you may want to edit.

Bic Mac clenched his teeth and squeezed his eyes shut from the sensation, he was so sensitive.

The slurping sounds she made, each time she pushed downwards, drowned out Big Macs moaning.

cowpony boots

But they're not ponies. Why would they be called cowpony boots?

Boost of Confidence = Maximum sex!