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Satsuma


Has a self-surprising penchant for enjoying and writing shipfics and 'Air Supply'.

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There are some things you can lose, and some things that you can't, no matter how hard you try. Sunset Shimmer has lost everything once before. When it happens again, she finds out that there are some things that persevere even when you don't.

Like all of us, she finds it hard to confront her failure for what it is; all her fault. A flaw of self: character, priorities, ideals. Choices. Leaving Equestria was one such choice. Flash Sentry was another. Hostile takeover was the latest poor decision, and it has led her to this dilemma of self.

This fic is set after Sunset Shimmer's defeat in the first Equestria Girls movie.

It's also been left to collect dust for about half a year of studying, so not everything will fit where it is supposed to. Also, quality spikes (or the rest is really, really bad). This is a work in progress. I have more planned, including improvements to current content, but it's hopefully not going to be too long. Depends on what feedback I receive.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 14 )

Think of this as a self-development experiment of sorts. I kinda wanna make it so that I'm not really the only one writing this. It's a lofty ideology but it would be kinda cool.

5281240 Well I'l say you've got an interesting approach, I wish you luck with it.

This is really good so far. Keep up the good work!

Hell of a chapter, mate. Spot on!

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....I didn't think my communication was that bad.

Where's the ambiguity? I'll put it on a list of changes/improvements somewhere.

Still wondering how a story could possibly be this good.

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Still wondering how people say things that are so nice

It lives! And it is GLORIOUS!

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Still not ded bruh

I'm not sure you could call a place like Canterlot High "sleepy".

Comment posted by Satsuma deleted Nov 22nd, 2015

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Oookay I'm a little confused. CHS or Canterlot?
The former is generally situated in some unnamed suburb, and I guess it would be pretty empty after school hours. The latter, well in my experience cities can get pretty sleepy at certain times of the year or day.

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