Going to comic-con. Didn't think I'd end up in equestria that for sure. Can't eat food, Can't drink anymore. Hell I can't even sleep. Well I guess that not true I do sleep but only for two days a month.
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That was cool but who is the voice with the pink words
5721261 you find out in the other crossover. to tell the truth I have no idea I forgot who it was.
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There is no greater insult.
5721356 lol sorry I'll fix that later XP
We shall say it will be soon revealed from our end.
awesome chapter and priceless ending love of all that's holy please keep up the great work
5722947 thanks I'll keep working on it ^^
5723185 oh thank you I thank you I thank you I thank you I thank you
Awesome story but I notice there a lot of misused words...
EX: You ( or your editor) use 'latter' when it should be 'letter'
It almost like someone used an auto-correct program and didn't bother to double check...
Also as far as I know you don't need to end ! or ? with a . all the time
5751249 okay I'm just used to using ? for if someone don't know something or asking something and ! for if someone yelling or shouting.
5784861 Thanks for pointing those out anyway. also I have asked for help but so far I haven't gotten much feed back for editors.
I did have some help from others here and their. But ya I'll take any help I can get.
Not only that but you would be intimidating if you was, well intimidating." I say as I run my fingers along the blade of my staff.
"You dare mock me!." He growls in anger.
"No, no, no, no... piff ya." If I could I'd be smiling.
That's from hellsing abridged
5859614 oh yes XD
I'm enjoying this. I really am. The plot is paced well, and it's not overly confused.
The grammar, though... It's almost ruining it for me. Almost.
I kinda felt bad for what happened to Sombra.
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funny
I have so many questions about this particular line right now
By Führer, you really need an editor. My inner grammar nazi just wants to set up a gas chamber just for you, because of all the atrocities you have comitted against language...
Egads, you really need to go through the story and kill some of those typos. It really hurts to read.
Thumbs down.
The idea is cool, but the poor grammar makes this story impossible to enjoy.