Welp, that your opinion, and I can't really change that. I do appreciate the fact that you're probably the first person who didn't like it and leave a comment however, so thanks for that! I also like your stuff.
500338 Yeah, I don't like drive-by up-or-down-voting without commenting. I can't think of what details to say, though. I guess I know that you're going for 4th wall humor, but I feel like you need to be more subtle and mind-bending with that to make it funnier.
Like how, in Monty Python's Flying Circus, the police officer walking around with his pants down and his boxer shorts exposed while he shoplifts-- saying "Oh, that's nice" while putting a watch into his pocket.... that's pretty funny.
It would be less funny if it was, say, the police officer flying in outer space shooting space lazers from his fingertips... that starts becoming just weird.
Also: thanks! Which of my stories have you looked at so far?
Thanks for giving some critique of my fic. Unfortunately, I'm not sure how I can follow up on that. To be perfectly frank, my friend and I started working on this when I linked Gucci Mane in Equestria, and someone requested Vanilla Ice in Equestria as a joke. We both wanted to write it, and so we worked on the first chapter together. Most of the humor will probably run off on the fact that Vanilla Ice is like some kinda unholy cross-breed of jedi and blaxploitation star. It will be fairly crazy, and is most definitely some form of trollfic. It WILL live up to that mature rating, and to be honest, this kinda caters to a small crowd. I do respect your opinion however.
On an unrelated note, my favorite fic of yours would have to be the one where Rarity is a fanfic writer for My Little Human, if only for how meta it is.
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It's not a joke, it's fo' real.
Also, fuck yeah, Vanilla Ice, baby! This nigga has it all!
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Please elaborate.
Not funny, just kind of sad. Sorry bro.
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Welp, that your opinion, and I can't really change that. I do appreciate the fact that you're probably the first person who didn't like it and leave a comment however, so thanks for that! I also like your stuff.
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Yeah, I don't like drive-by up-or-down-voting without commenting. I can't think of what details to say, though. I guess I know that you're going for 4th wall humor, but I feel like you need to be more subtle and mind-bending with that to make it funnier.
Like how, in Monty Python's Flying Circus, the police officer walking around with his pants down and his boxer shorts exposed while he shoplifts-- saying "Oh, that's nice" while putting a watch into his pocket.... that's pretty funny.
It would be less funny if it was, say, the police officer flying in outer space shooting space lazers from his fingertips... that starts becoming just weird.
Also: thanks! Which of my stories have you looked at so far?
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Thanks for giving some critique of my fic. Unfortunately, I'm not sure how I can follow up on that. To be perfectly frank, my friend and I started working on this when I linked Gucci Mane in Equestria, and someone requested Vanilla Ice in Equestria as a joke. We both wanted to write it, and so we worked on the first chapter together. Most of the humor will probably run off on the fact that Vanilla Ice is like some kinda unholy cross-breed of jedi and blaxploitation star. It will be fairly crazy, and is most definitely some form of trollfic. It WILL live up to that mature rating, and to be honest, this kinda caters to a small crowd. I do respect your opinion however.
On an unrelated note, my favorite fic of yours would have to be the one where Rarity is a fanfic writer for My Little Human, if only for how meta it is.