Okay the first two times you used your you used the wrong your. You used the possessive your instead of the contraction you're, second grade grammar come on.
Um seeing all the need editor things i guess i should say, when rainbow is talking to pinkie's mother she says "Uh, no thanks! I cant find it, thank you!" I think you meant can, but other than that fantastic.
what happened to the bubbly personality in the original fan-fic? that pinkie would have only seen the regeneration as a minor setback instead of getting pissed of
Okay the first two times you used your you used the wrong your. You used the possessive your instead of the contraction you're, second grade grammar come on.
Damnit... i need an editor
fixed them!
plz moar, i need more of this story, it is soo good!!!
take all of my 's
alright this settles it. i need an editor
i have a good idea but i have the grammer skills of blind elementary school student
any volunteers please?
I will confirm the awesomeness of your story with my red truth:
This is the best Cupcakes sequel/story ever.
I want moar.
WHOLLY ST THANKS!
Thank for all the compliments guys! i wont let you down! EPIC BRO HOOF! {insert brohoof}
502830 I'm always offering proofreading services. Just send me a message, and I'll help anyway I can.
Thanks again for all the advice and compliments! you guys ready for chapter 5?
Um seeing all the need editor things i guess i should say, when rainbow is talking to pinkie's mother she says
"Uh, no thanks! I cant find it, thank you!" I think you meant can, but other than that fantastic.
Keep up the great work!
fixed!
what happened to the bubbly personality in the original fan-fic? that pinkie would have only seen the regeneration as a minor setback instead of getting pissed of