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My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
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Liking it so far a few grammar errors every once inawhile but not bad
I'm not gonna read much further because it feels like his personality has completely changed when he turned into a pony and he's not questioning things as much as a real person would
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Thank you for your comment. Though honestly this was my very first fanfic and I know It may start out a bit terrible. But I think I've really grown as a writer even a little bit since I started this story. Check out another story I'm currently writing called Zootopia: When Worlds Collide on Fanfiction and I'm sure you'll find a much better narrative than the one I made here. Plus I'm heavily considering re writing this whole story and making some changes.