This is how derpy's life came to an end...... almost......but not quite.
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Hello! I'm just an eighth grader living in Baltimore, Maryland. My grammar could use a lot of work, but other that that I guess my stories are pretty decent at times.
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Stories like this I'm always iffy on but I like Derpy and the story is decent but If you don't mind answering where do you plan on taking this story I'm curious.
5069936 I'm actually finished with it, but if I think of something, i will let you know!
5073030 Ok and just a bit of friendly advice if you see the negative bare a little higher than the good don't let it get you down it doesn't mean you made a bad story just some people don't fined it "nice" I guess you could say. I still like it.
5073094 thnaks. but i don't write stories for popularity. even if some people don't like it, that's ok. what matters is that i had fun writing it.
5073120 great mentality (hope I'm using that word correctly)
5073178 I think you are. and thank you!
5073230 no prob best of luck with any other stories you'll come up with.
5073230 no prob best of luck with any other stories you'll come up with.
5073239 thanks! i'm working on one right now actually. it's called "diaries of a flightless pegasus" i'm truing to wright it as if it were an actual diary, but it's not going too well.....
5073253 Why? Any problems I could help with?
5073264 well, this is only the second story i'm writing. but no thanks. I think i about figured to out
5073287 ok than good luck and every need any help just ask.
God this is depressing
This doesn't have to be the end. He has a time machine, problem solved.
5080290 yeah i guess. But it was like two in the morning when i wrote this.
5082307 It's cool. Even with the time machine though there'd probably be a paradox or some shit, there always is.
You had a few grammatical errors, but other than that it was a great story. I absolutely loved it. It was just a freaking roller coaster of emotions. The ending was quite unexpected and sudden, but I like it, not a typical "they all lived happily ever after" kind of thing. You put in a nice touch of Doctor and Derpy shipping at the end. Then, plot twist, she dies.
5129335 Thanks! I know there were grammatical errors, but I just can't find time to correct them. Also, I find it very annoying when a story has a happy ending.
this was me
good story but the her reasoning should had been futher delved into
5293740 yeah, I know. I realize it wasn't very well built, but I was a having a slumberparteh aid mah bff and I was randomly inspired to write something like this......with an empty stomach......at two in the morning XD
5302017
still well worth the read and the like and it pretty good apart from that a prequl would fix it up just fine
5302749 ok! might do that after I finish the story i'm working on now.
I'm gonna cry. I'm gonna cry. I'm gonna cry.
I"M GONNA CRY!
This was so sad!