• Member Since 29th Apr, 2014
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Szalhi


Welcome to my unfinished fics. When will I finish one? Probably never. ZipporWhill is best pony. Cozy Glow is second best Pony. Angel is best animal, just look at him would you?

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Flagged for full re-write.


2000 years after her death, Twilight Sparkle is revived to find herself in A crippling Equestria where a force known as the darkness is attempting to take over the land. The land was brought into a golden age by an unknown Sphere known as the traveler that replaced the lost Alicorns. But it also brought the Darkness with it. Revived by a ghost, she is claimed to be one of many that protect the land. A Warlock. A guardian.


Second story in sci-fi series

Note, Twilight was never Alicorn. Reason for A.U Tag

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

5080892 Next chapter may give you feels. Not at the tower yet.

I feel like she wouldn't be so comfortable takinga life, no natter how hostile it may be.

This story could have had much more character growth if you'd adressed that.

I also notice that you don't use commas where you probably should.

... Ghost said, almsot finished.

If you want any more tips, my PM is always an option. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Nerdboi Clique 1076 deleted Oct 2nd, 2014

5082383 That takes up many questions. Would she be comfortable killing the vex? A lot has changed since her death.

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