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Yay amazing chapter! Only minor mistakes here and there i think i found 2 but anyway.
This story is turning out really nicely, it has a very good pace. Do continue writing.
(( I gently pressed my lips to the front of her hoof and Ruby gasped, freezing up
“Consider yourself under my spell"))
Nice quote :3
5495570 Dead obvious! XD Also I put that in cause of you saying if it was inspired by Spice and Wolf, first to say it but not the last! :)
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Well it just reminded me of the anime, but i really love the quote, fits in nicely to the story, looking forward for more spirals and spices :3
5496441 Thanks! :) Spoilers for next chapter: They kiss! :D
Why do you keep spelling it with an a?
I doubt he will say this but have her mom come up with new rights to ponies or have boy Lamias born.
I never saw the show but I’m guessing that spell or kissing hoof part.
I'm with Bolt here. Don't really know what happened here
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She wanted him to cuddle her, but got no cuddles.