One Year Later…
Scootaloo sighed happily, lying out on a picnic blanket that rested in the warm sun. The whole group had come to this picnic…the Apple Family, Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Rarity and Sweetie Belle, and Fluttershy herself, whose coat was a bright, shining yellow and mane pinker then it ever had been before. Things were quiet, peaceful, and otherwise, perfect. Applejack and Rainbow Dash were hoofwrastling on a nearby stump while Rarity and Twilight talked about different kinds of magic that could be used for fashion and other things of the sort. Scootaloo felt a warmth press against her side and she smiled, nuzzling up against it. A hoof stroked her purple mane as she heard Fluttershy speak softly “I made your favorite type of cupcake, I hope you like it!” Everypony turned to hear the loud “SQUEE!!!” of a poofy-haired Pinkie Pie, who took the cupcake quickly and hugged her friend tightly, smiling and shouting
“OH THANK YOU THANK YOU Fluttershy!!! I love cotton candy flavored cupcakes! You’re the best friend ever!” Everypony smiled at Pinkie Pie’s outburst of happiness. It had been a full year since the day Pinkie Pie was sent to the moon, and when she came back a few days earlier, she spoke not once about the experience…and no one asked her about it. Everyone was fine with this, not wanting to upset Pinkie about it and knowing that either way, Pinkie Pie was punished for what she did and nothing more needed to be said about it. The day passed by quickly, everypony exchanging hugs and cheerful farewells. Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, and Scootaloo walked together towards Fluttershy’s cottage as the sun began to set. Sugar Cube Corner was still being renovated, new additions and repairs being made. Pinkie Pie didn’t mind, she got to spend all the time she wanted with her best friend and her adopted daughter. She stopped on the top of Fluttershy’s bridge, the one that led to her cottage on the edge of the Everfree forest. She sat on her haunches and smiled warmly at the setting sun. A moment later, Scootaloo sat next to her, pushing and nuzzling against her coat, watching the sun with her. Fluttershy sat as well, on the other side of Pinkie Pie, watching as well with a peaceful look of contentment on her face. They sat there a moment and smiled when Pinkie draped a hoof around their shoulders, pulling them close and whispering
“I love you guys…”
….The End…................................for now.
Is this suppose to be a cross with V for Vendetta or Count of Monty Cristo?
Wow, that has to be THE BEST fanfic I have ever read.
Heartbreak, fugitive(Ness), murder, all in the right amounts, all for a reason.
Fot that reason, I give you all the internets in existance
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Actually it's a slight crossover from Sweeny Todd. I've never heard of the others
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No, wait, I have heard of V for Vendetta, my bad.
BRAVO! Genius, wonderful, emotional...
you sir did an absolutely fantastic job.
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Thank you so much, stay tuned for the sequel!
Excuse me Please, i need to wipe all the Win offa my Screen.
Oh and i need some new Pants and a shower.
This fanfic is so well written, I enjoyed it alot! Thank you for your efforts!
Absoloutley astonishing,
No doubt one of The Bast fanfictions i hae ever read,
For Writing this, Thank you
~Swiftie ^-^
Wow...just finished reading this. While reading this fic I was disturbed, scared, mortified, moved, saddened...I can't even go on there's so much.
There were times I nearly threw up and times where I nearly cried. This was such a dark, twisted, beautiful fic. The songs that were 'sang' throughout the fic were amazing and really added to the atmosphere of the story and gave it a nice creepy and ominous feeling.
I had one problem...chapter 8 >o<. I nearly fell out of my chair when I read her sentence. One year? That's it? She killed all those ponies and made them into baked goods and that's all she gets? The fact that her friends are okay with what she did is kind of a put off too. Plus no one seemed to care that she fed ponies to other ponies >o>. I can see the other ponies...uh forgiving her (for lack of a better word) about the murder of Trottington, but she fed ponies to other ponies >o>. I just find that kind of ending...hollow.
This chapter was a beautiful chapter and a very touching ending. I nearly shed a tear when I saw the picture of Pinkie Pie at the end there. I can't wait to get started on the sequels tomorrow :D.
Have a good one.
Great work 6 out of 5. My Little Dashie got 7 of 5. Felt like crying but didn't, bloody. Cupcakes got 3.5/5. Twist was great. I have more to say, but on a Nook.
Alright now I am on a computer lets add to my review.
- The Great: The song was eerie and added to the atmosphere (Reminds me of 1, 2 Freddy's Comming for You), the Twist, blood and violence, Redemption, the Story, and characters.
-The Good: Detective seems like the guy from Heavy Rain and Revenge.
-Bad: A few plot holes.
Like I said a 6 out of 5.
Next thing to read Pinknesia: The Darker Decent, I have high hopes for this one.
You brought my soul to places it’s never been, in a good way.
I was depressed. I am no longer depressed, simply in aw at the beautiful story. Thank you!