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FarTail
I am a 14 year old fanfic writer. I have started writing in third person. I usally write in first-person so expect varying stories. Some will be dark. Some will be comidic. I write varying types.
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What the...
Fuck?
I was going to say 'blazing pile of shit', but that's better
My God, it's like I'm seeing this type of story for the first fucking time! My brain can't take this much originality!
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5074502 Yea that was a lame story it don't have much story to it and what happen to spike
5074585
Obvious sarcasm is obvious.
Unless you're serious, then go fuck yourself.
5074618
You pain me so.
How did this get accepted? The description describes nothing at all
2spooked
17 dislikes wow I knew this story was going to get some bad criticism but really? It's not that bad sure gore's not everybody thing but this wasn't the most extreme thing out there, I can name a lot more disturbing things then this. Cut the guy a break.
5075923
In one word: No.
There's gore for the sake of telling the story. There's gore for the express purpose of being over the top. And there's gore for the sake of gore. Guess which one this story is?
The only purpose this exists is for gore. No other reason. It's boring and if it wasn't admittedly written by a 14 year old I'd think a child wrote this. There's little in the way of characterization or plot for that matter. No, just Pinkamena getting all crazy and wanting to kill ponies. But instead of her having something like a motive, it's just kill and hope for the best.
If you want to set the mood then fine, use language, suspense, have Pinkamena revel in this carnage but instead we get some tepid scenes with the word blood used way too many times and incomplete sentences.
5076170 Yes I can agree with the gore and plot wise part, but there's still worst crap out there than this anyone remember that pile of bullshit sweet apple massacre (worst read of my life) Now that was a pile of shit, but that's my opinion and I give the guy credit for trying.
5076316 Yeah, this was decent. Not awesome, but for a gore fic it was reasonable.
5076517 thank you, for getting that.
5076316
It doesn't matter if there's worse stuff out there. That doesn't somehow make this good. It's written in a ham handed way with gore for the sake of gore. There is no other purpose here other than that.
You admit the gore and plot are badly done and yet you still give the author props for doing so. That really doesn't make sense in my book.
5077824 Funny. Actually funny. No sarcasm.
5078707 no I'm giving the guy props for trying. Writing isn't an easy thing I think we can all agree on that. But yes I agree that just because there's something worse is out there it doesn't make another thing any better, I agree that this story is all about gore and that doesn't make a story, regardless I'll give the guy some credit for trying and hope he does better in the future. That's all. Other than that I can admit that this was a bad story.
5081569 Thanks. Its just I didn't know the topic was done to death already. I am relatively new to the fandom. And I don't read a lot of fan fics as it is.
Shouldn't this have the Pinkie Pie tag?
YEAH!!!!!!!! SCREW RARITY!!!!!!!!!!!!! you made my day good lad
rainbow would have died at the instant her skull hit the acid.
should have had spike either go with or kill pinkamena at some point