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it was inevitable

4989197 fuckyoufuckyoufuckyoufuckyoufuckyoufuckyoufuckyoufuckyoufuckyoufuckyoufuckyoufuckyou

Great concept!

Interesting.

And it's clear that, for all his seemingly benevolent words, he's still as repulsive a bastard as the other stallions. He's just much better at lying to himself, methinks.

not bad.
better then some of the other stuff, specially the ones that got sent here and not the anti-group for whatever reason.

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Thank you, I wasn't sure how well this would go, given this is my first shot at writing clop.

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Yeah, Gilded is still a messed up bastard, for all the airs he puts on. While he genuinely values his "property" it doesn't change the fact that he still treats the mares as objects, or prized pets.

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Thanks. Seems to be going over well, far as Fallfics go.

I approve of the fetish. ALL the fetishes

I STRONGLY disapprove the FoE setting though. I mean... Why? Just why? You didn't need it. You SHOULDN't need it. And seeing such a thing keep living here despite being propagated by only ONE artist who's just shameless enough to do everything for money (and not the best anthro at that) is kinda sad.

Owell, will still read because there's not enough impreg around, I hope we'll see more actual preg too.

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You seem to have trouble counting past one. Here's a hint: there are as many artists doing FoE as there are fingers on both your hands. If you take your socks off, you'd be able to count the authors too!

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Interesting men are definitely lacking in FoE so far (especially the art), and it's great to see authors fixing that. "Look at what a kind person I am, treating my toys so nicely" is a brilliant way to do it.

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Fair enough, I understand the setting isn't one a lot of people like, and I don't begrudge you your opinion on it. I'll be the first to admit there are things about it that don't appeal to me either. I do think its the right backdrop for this particular story, though. Gilded would probably come off as even more of a bastard if he was doing this in a normal Equestria.

As to your question, yes, if I manage to get there I intend for the pregnancies to go all the way in time. The next few chapters are mostly going to focus on new mares and their adjusting to life in the manor, though.

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Thanks, I do hope to keep Gilded interesting enough, even if this is pretty much going to be shameless clop about knocking up mares.

I will enjoy every killing Caribou I see

There's not enough impregnation material on this site, which, for some inexplicable reason, is my fetish too...

On top of that it's well written and a good length for a chapter.

I really liked the attention to the 'relationship' between the characters, especially the dialogue was spot on.

Being a Fall of Equestria story, it's not as bad as some of the others (I don't like mares getting hurt (too much)) and not with a main character who doesn't want to have sex at all. It's a pretty much perfect middle ground.

This is a wild story so far I can't wait to see what happens next to them all.

I agree fascination with impregnation fetish, but I can only despise Fall of Equestria. Every time I read one of these, I'm filled with hatred and anger.

Well...

Now, I'm not one to particularly enjoy a Fall of Equestria story (though I do read them on occasion), but this is quite the fine piece of ass right here. This is the first FoE story that I might come back to later! That's unusual, because the whole slavery thing deters me from returning!
Very good work!

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In complete agreement with you that there is nowhere near enough impregnation fics out there. Glad to hear you like the story so far.

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Thank you.

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I certainly can't fault you for your opinion on the setting. It is definitely focused on an extreme set of fetishes that will rub a number of people the wrong way. Heck, there are things about it that bother me, too, I'm just accepting of its existence as being basically as legitimate as any other fetish based fanwork. Still, thanks for checking the story out anyway, even if the setting rubs you wrong.

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Thank you or saying so. I hope to continue to please.

5003296 It's not that I have anything against the pregnancy or any fetish in the story. It's just that I hate FoE. I hate it with a burning passion that could set a forest on fire. I even been writing my own fanfics where the Caribou not only get their asses handed to them but they regret that they were even born.

But ignoring the fact that it is FoE, it's a pretty decent clopfic that I wouldn't mind reading again. I would if it wasn't for the fact that it is FUCKING FoE!!!!!

But yeah ignoring my burning hatred for FoE, it was pretty good and you should keep up with it. Just don't do FoE. Why you may ask is because I know for a fact that I am not the only Brony that feels this way about FoE.

5003787 >Trying to dictate what one can and cannot do outside of Tumblr.

kek to the nth degree. XD

What's the source of the icon? I believe you'd have to PM me, correct? :T

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Not really, its not a cropped image. That's literally the whole thing, as you can see here.

5015132 'Kay, cool. :3

Wow, I just noticed this was uploaded on Sept. 11th. Coincidence or intentional?

Anyway, I saw this story a few days ago but like most things I encounter of possible interest, put it on the Read It Later list... despite that I have a fetish for pregnancy myself, and am a fan of Fall of Equestria, despite some of the aspects (the chopping of horns and plucking of wings, among other stuff as I delve more into the canon stories of this, despite having known some of the stuff beforehand). But got an urge to check it out, so I went with it!

It is unexpected how it goes from what was... well, while I didn't expect cooperation, if Octavia was a black as in a pic or two she's been in (not to mention, I think in Twilight Falls), goes from that her current owner Gilded Cage would discuss the matter perhaps to revealing he drugged her to force the situation ahead of time, if he didn't know a fertility or some other kind of lust spell. And the implication of owning his daughter is a bit creepy, even if I know Big Mac is forced to own his sister(s) and others may do so with fillies in their families, but doubt we'll be seeing any such thing with FIMFiction's policy on anthro stories with foalcon (if even implying incest).

The sex scene did seem a bit well-done, even if I did spot a spelling error here and there in a few sentences. I did question if he might also do Octavia in the ass, even if that was contrary to his purpose for buying her. And will he be using the drugs again later on, if needed on other black collars I assume he'll be buying? If there won't be buying conveniently (or unplanned) during a mare he seeks' heat cycle.

I do think I'd like to see Vinyl next, if that'd count as someone skilled in arts/athletics, as she's not exactly a classical music player. Not sure who else there is, other than maybe Rainbow Dash, if he could buy a Wonderbolt (or Wondersluts, I think the name is now, which I question how they function now, if the mares can't even fly and dunno if anyone other than Soarin' and the mentioned in one episode Rapid Fire are stallions)... plus a former Element of Harmony. And dunno if we'll be seeing the status of Octavia in a later chapter or a forced threesome, involving another mare he's bought (and knocked up) already, if not her. But I suppose that is up to you.

I do wonder how this story will go on or rather end, if the plot of this is to buy mares with talent and knock them up, but not really concerned about that right now. Just thinking ahead of time. Well, I hope you get another chapter with another mare out soon, if you feel like it!

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Wow, I just noticed this was uploaded on Sept. 11th. Coincidence or intentional?

Pure coincidence. I didn't even realize what I'd done until a couple of days afterward.

It is unexpected how it goes from what was... well, while I didn't expect cooperation, if Octavia was a black as in a pic or two she's been in (not to mention, I think in Twilight Falls), goes from that her current owner Gilded Cage would discuss the matter perhaps to revealing he drugged her to force the situation ahead of time, if he didn't know a fertility or some other kind of lust spell.

My personal take on Octavia is that she's kind of a "passive aggressive". She has the black collar because she doesn't accept the role females are forced to have in Caribou culture, but she's also not the type to violently resist, either.

And the implication of owning his daughter is a bit creepy, even if I know Big Mac is forced to own his sister(s) and others may do so with fillies in their families, but doubt we'll be seeing any such thing with FIMFiction's policy on anthro stories with foalcon (if even implying incest).

Though I don't intend the timeline to get to the point where the offspring of these endeavors get old enough to be characters themselves, I'd say Gilded isn't the type to actually do anything with the ones who will be born female. They'd still, essentially, be objects and taught their role in society, but Gilded would treat them as treasured possessions. If he was to let another male touch them it'd only be under the most controlled of circumstances, with him overseeing the affair if not directly participating.

And will he be using the drugs again later on, if needed on other black collars I assume he'll be buying? If there won't be buying conveniently (or unplanned) during a mare he seeks' heat cycle.

The drugs will be used on and off again, yes, along with other creative methods Gilded will cook up to get the mares both "in the mood" and in a proper heat in order to conceive.

I do think I'd like to see Vinyl next, if that'd count as someone skilled in arts/athletics, as she's not exactly a classical music player. Not sure who else there is, other than maybe Rainbow Dash, if he could buy a Wonderbolt (or Wondersluts, I think the name is now, which I question how they function now, if the mares can't even fly and dunno if anyone other than Soarin' and the mentioned in one episode Rapid Fire are stallions)... plus a former Element of Harmony. And dunno if we'll be seeing the status of Octavia in a later chapter or a forced threesome, involving another mare he's bought (and knocked up) already, if not her. But I suppose that is up to you.

This is something I've been putting a lot of thought into, and while I don't want to spoil the story by saying which mare's he's going for I can say I'm open to the idea of suggestions. Octavia, and every additional mare Gilded acquires, will appear in future chapters and I'm even thinking of doing chapters that show their POVs as well. I wasn't specifically planning for Vinyl yet, but had an idea or two to bring her in. I was at least intending for the popular fanon of Octavia and Vinyl knowing each other and at one time being roommates to be canon in this fic. To my knowledge Vinyl is a red collar in the Fallverse, so Gilded might not be as interested in her as he is others, but she does have talents worth preserving, so she's a possible acquisition in the future, yes.

5022490 Yes, red-on-black action is always welcome. >:3

EXTERMINATUS THE SLANNSHI HERETICS!!!! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h67JpMyrOVE

(Sigh)
Is it to much to ask for to just find a fic about the carribou getting murdered?

Good clop material though.

The danger inherent in that simply added to my excitement, but I was prepared for the possibility. I had had her escorted to my door by my manor’s guards, and she knew they waited outside. She might escape, or take my life, but she knew help was but a moment’s call away. More than that, she was in the center of Canterlot, one of the most heavily guarded city’sin Caribou controlled Equestria. What point would there be in attacking me, if only for a brief moment of transitory freedom?

Cities*