You are a precocious colt spending the summer with Spitfire, your mom's boss. You've already got a slight crush on her, but now with the entire summer ahead of the both of you, you feel like anything could happen.
Spitfire keeps teasing him, and he keeps reacting poorly. It's like she's forgotten that he's a teenager. He's not nearly mature enough to roll with that level of teasing.
So Spitfire knows about how her guess feels. She's playing with him like a toy, but hopefully, all the waiting will pay off for this guy and he'll get Spitfire.
4938880 To be fair, in reference to all the posts about teasing him, he's been acting like a right little perv so far. I think he deserves all he gets.
I don't understand the comments about anthro either.
They aren't doing anything you wouldn't see ponies from the show doing. Does wearing panties make this anthro?
I actually rewrote the first chapter because it had some stuff about her wearing a bra that actually DID sound anthro, mostly because it's difficult to convey in words that the bra on a pony is down around the 'udders' so to speak.
"Just...just a friend of mine. He liked that pair."
Ok... Spitfire is just being cruel now... The stairs thing was one thing... the thing inside the store was pushing it, but that last line... Talk about a kick in his balls when he is already down
4940060 Well Faust already said ponies have children like any other mammal...so I guess they do all the other mammal-y stuff as well. Maybe all the mares in the show use tampons? I think you should contact Hasbro immediately on this obvious overlook.
I just wanted a bunch of feminine products that would gross out a teen, so I used some big old feminine napkins, nothing better. Plus Spitfire dresses in clothes nearly every day, being an instructor and a Wonderbolt, affording her the luxury of choice.
4940485 I got the anthro vibe from when you were talking about the board game near her teats. The way you described them I got a human breast feel. If anything that would be it. I would refer to her "breasts" as "teats" from now on to avoid any confusion. But thats just my suggestion.
You can tell she still finds the whole thing extremely amusing. Still chuckling, she asks, "So rookie, honestly, how long have you been after your instructor's plot." Celestia, please strike me down right now. "Can we not talk about this, please?" "Alright, alright. I'll drop it. But if you don't tell me, you still have to do those extra fifteen floors." "Fine." you mumble. Anything is better than this.
I just LOVE this part the most. I absolutely adore this...whatever this is called.
I'm not sure if you are the kind that takes corrections, but on the off chance:
anything to do with the hamper. Mine as well get something to eat.
>Mine as well
handful of bits and you would while away the whole day there.
>you would while away the whole day I'm guessing its just a mix of two edits.
And if it makes any difference, I also get the anthro feel here. If only because the clothing used here goes farther then shirts, hats, and dresses. And add in Chinese places, arcades, and just general real world stuff, it gives it that feeling. at least for me anyway.
He could hang out here and watch other ponies having fun, while melding into the background, invisible. It wasn't any use talking to anyone, anyways. He wouldn't be around for more than a few months usually.
Now, am I wrong or was this just a mess-up of perspective? Seeing as how this is a second person story and all...
"Look kid, I'm responsible for you this summer and all I've seen so far is a little...pervert...that needs some discipline. I tried the nice auntie routine and guess what? I woke up to a pair of semen soaked underwear."
I would say she makes a good point, but she has been teasing him from the get-go. No way she hasn't been teasing him sexually.
"Oh hey. One other thing." She takes out a baby blue piece of fabric. Your eyes go wide in horror. "Don't use my panties again. Or it'll be the last time you use that thing for anything."
...Nixon? Really? I'm sure one could headcanon something about how a non-princess pony became so important that an era was named after them, but... it just sticks out too much for me to contemplate it at the moment.
Also, unrelated, why does a building in an all-pegasus city have stairs?
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That's a bit different than a pony, who normally wears nothing, wearing and having panties and pads.
I wonder what will happen in the end. And I really don't want this to go On Hiatus for months...I had a nightmare about that...
I'm sure how thrilled Fleetfoot is going to be if she finds out her boss is leching on her kid.
Damn cocktease much?
poor kid, not really though
The "friend" is you. I'm a bleedin' psychic!
In all seriousness, I would love to see where this goes.
Hmm. My bet on mutual sex-friendship , with Spitfire as dominant in this.
This is just brilliant. Brilliant. And gotta love that Benjamin Button reference.
Please update soon!
Fleetfoo will be horrified to learn (if she ever does) what her boss has done to her poor, poor, foal.
On a side note, he did deserve that.
i feel bad for him.. i really do...
Spitfire...you are an evil bitch
that just makes this all the more funny
I want to feel bad for him, but it's just too fucking funny a situation to say it with anything near a straight face
Spitfire keeps teasing him, and he keeps reacting poorly. It's like she's forgotten that he's a teenager. He's not nearly mature enough to roll with that level of teasing.
I feel... dirty
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She doesn't look too old to me.
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This sounds like an anthro fic in the way they wear clothes and sit and other stuff.
You and this story have been Featured by the way.
Congratulations!
4939085 That picture will haunt me in my nightmares......
More more more please
So Spitfire knows about how her guess feels. She's playing with him like a toy, but hopefully, all the waiting will pay off for this guy and he'll get Spitfire.
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To be fair, in reference to all the posts about teasing him, he's been acting like a right little perv so far. I think he deserves all he gets.
I don't understand the comments about anthro either.
They aren't doing anything you wouldn't see ponies from the show doing. Does wearing panties make this anthro?
I actually rewrote the first chapter because it had some stuff about her wearing a bra that actually DID sound anthro, mostly because it's difficult to convey in words that the bra on a pony is down around the 'udders' so to speak.
Ok... Spitfire is just being cruel now...
The stairs thing was one thing... the thing inside the store was pushing it, but that last line...
Talk about a kick in his balls when he is already down
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fancy seeing you here
4939749 ok but what is the use of pads if ponys don't ever use clothing except for being fancy and in the show thier are no such thing as panties
Damn, I hate a tease like this.
Hope she doesn't keep it up now that their even.
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Well Faust already said ponies have children like any other mammal...so I guess they do all the other mammal-y stuff as well.
Maybe all the mares in the show use tampons?
I think you should contact Hasbro immediately on this obvious overlook.
I just wanted a bunch of feminine products that would gross out a teen, so I used some big old feminine napkins, nothing better. Plus Spitfire dresses in clothes nearly every day, being an instructor and a Wonderbolt, affording her the luxury of choice.
Grab dat plot like a stallion bro, don't worry bout no concequences yet til' later, get some action
Such a tease baby, such a tease I love it
Umm, sorry but does this need to be marked as anthro?
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Ok I am really genuinely curious now, I need specific lines why this is appearing to be anthro?
It's bothering me cause I'm not a huge anthro fan, personally.
Oh god my sides! If I wasn't asexual I would be pissed at her!
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I got the anthro vibe from when you were talking about the board game near her teats. The way you described them I got a human breast feel. If anything that would be it. I would refer to her "breasts" as "teats" from now on to avoid any confusion. But thats just my suggestion.
Oh, jst so you know, the "probly"s should be "probably"s
I just LOVE this part the most. I absolutely adore this...whatever this is called.
I must have more of this!
You silly horse, you have wings you could be using right now!
I'm not sure if you are the kind that takes corrections, but on the off chance:
>Mine as well
>you would while away the whole day
I'm guessing its just a mix of two edits.
And if it makes any difference, I also get the anthro feel here.
If only because the clothing used here goes farther then shirts, hats, and dresses.
And add in Chinese places, arcades, and just general real world stuff, it gives it that feeling. at least for me anyway.4946261
Fixed the first one, thanks. I think the second could technically be 'wile' or 'while'.
^ dying, it's dying.
Now, am I wrong or was this just a mess-up of perspective? Seeing as how this is a second person story and all...
Loving this, by the way
Spitfire, you little tease.
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Fixed those, thanks.
Spitfire, you fucking massive troll.
I would say she makes a good point, but she has been teasing him from the get-go. No way she hasn't been teasing him sexually.
That's weird, I'm 14 but I don't have the same problem like this guy here
Damn spitfire is evil.
she took a 13 year old colt to a mares underwear store the poor guy.
5065473 I remember the awkward moments I experienced. The entire time I was thinking "UM. I DON'T BEONG HERE."
5065473 I remember the awkward moments I experienced. The entire time I was thinking "UM. I DON'T BEONG HERE."
5230375 I'm sorry WHAT!? XD
Okay, holy moly. Just, WOW. This kid...such torment. Heart goes out to ya kid. No man should be subjected to such torture
Your Spitfire is so mean! It's adrokable that colt is!
I usually can't stand to read 2nd Person style stories, but this one is definitely the exception to the rule! That poor kid, I love it!
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...Nixon? Really? I'm sure one could headcanon something about how a non-princess pony became so important that an era was named after them, but... it just sticks out too much for me to contemplate it at the moment.
Also, unrelated, why does a building in an all-pegasus city have stairs?