The Lightbringer has risen, the Enclave has fallen. Equestria is on the threshold of a new era. This is all very poetic, but KnickKnack is a pony with ambitions and he intends to pursue them. Question is - is he willing to pay the price?
The whole sex robot thing wasn't that funny this time around ... probably because it wasn't a surprise, we didn't see Quick's reaction to Sterling's newly-aquired fucktoy, and because you outright told us with a terminal.
Nonetheless, it's a good solid chapter, but it was missing some things I liked about it the first time I read this.
6220301 That was in the original, actually. I mean, I could edit that if you think it'd make it better, but the computer conversations are one of the parts I didn't actually edit.
If you're talking about the conversation in the bar, though, that'll now appear at the start of Chapter 2.
Edit: Oops, commented instead of adding Author's Notes. Imsmartiswear.
The whole sex robot thing wasn't that funny this time around ... probably because it wasn't a surprise, we didn't see Quick's reaction to Sterling's newly-aquired fucktoy, and because you outright told us with a terminal.
Nonetheless, it's a good solid chapter, but it was missing some things I liked about it the first time I read this.
and omg senpai loves me <3
6220301 That was in the original, actually. I mean, I could edit that if you think it'd make it better, but the computer conversations are one of the parts I didn't actually edit.
If you're talking about the conversation in the bar, though, that'll now appear at the start of Chapter 2.
Yay!. BD's back!
Solid chapter, sounds about right from what I remember of the original cut. Still great.
Now if I could could update myself faster. I hate my brain.