Night has fallen in Equestria, as you take a seat in the master chair of your base of operations. You check the time that's dimly lit on your computer screen in front of you. 11:45pm.
Almost there.
Every night, it was the same routine. When the sun is out, your home has enough power to run your basic needs and get by. However, at night, your solar power doesn't work. This forces you to rely on a battery that is safely protected in your basement. You wouldn't need a battery if they didn't change.
With a shudder, you check the cameras of your security system. The coast is clear around your home. Nothing inside and nothing outside.
At night, the lovable ponies of Equestria... change. It was like flipping a light switch. First, they would be cute, lovable and sensitive. Then... they would become raving monsters, hell bent on getting in your pants. Every man's dream? Right?
You'll admit.. the first few nights weren't quite so bad. Then, as time dragged on, all you wanted to do was cuddle.
You check the clock and sip on your coffee, carefully jumping from camera feed to camera feed.
Was that so much to ask? Apparently to the little beasts... it was. So now here you are, guarding your home with technology that simply shouldn't even exist in this world. You watch the clock hit midnight and you hit the switch on your battery backup. The percentage gauge lights up on your control panel, dimly showing 100% charge remaining.
"Here we go." You mutter under your breath.
The hair on the back of your neck stands up straight and your ears perk up. The safest place in your home was right here. To your left and to your right, there were hallways, providing you an escape in either direction. You placed cameras everywhere so that there weren't any blind spots. Starting with the cameras inside, you start a rotation.
Kitchen – Clear.
Living Room – Clear.
Bedroom – Clear.
Bathroom – Clear.
Hey, you can't be too careful. You gotta cover all your bases. Even if it means video taping yourself taking a dump.
Next you check your remaining cameras.
Backyard – Clear.
Westside – Clear.
Eastside – Clear.
Front –
You leap back in your chair as a yellow demon with pink butterflies on her chair stares directly into your camera with a smile.
"I'm coming iin, Anon," she chants.
Okay, Anon. Keep it together. Normal protocol. Only the doors to the left and to the right of you can be locked.
Watching the camera carefully, Fluttershy places her hoof on the handle of the door and presses herself inside. Quickly, you snap to the Living Room and watch her enter.
Alright, Fluttershy is a slow mover, you should still be able to look around.
Living Room – Flutters.
Kitchen – Clear.
Bathroom – Clear.
Snapping to the Bedroom, you find a purple unicorn raising her flank to the camera.
"Like what you see Anon?" she giggles.
You snap to the living room again, but the channel flips back to Twilight.
"Watch me Anon..."
Mashing the button for the Living room, the screen goes black.
"Shit... Shit..." you mutter, frantically searching for your flashlight.
The screen blinks back to life and shows your bedroom, empty.
"Fuck. Fuck!" you whisper, pushing the buttons swiftly.
Living Room – Still Fluttershy.
Bathroom – Nothing
Kitchen – Still nothing.
Left Hallway – Empty. Which means.
"There you are Anon~" a feminine voice whispers beside you.
Your fist slams into the button controlling the door to your right and your anti-magic steel-reinforced door slams down. A chill runs down your spine as you hear her hoof slam against the door.
"Nonny~ Open the dooor. Please?" she begs.
Fuuuck that. You turn back to the hallway camera where Twilight sits patiently, as if waiting for the door to magically open. Sighing to yourself, you check the clock. 1 AM and 85% power left. Still in good shape. Just 5 hours left.
Right Hallway – Twilight.
Left Hallway – Empty.
Bathroom – Empty.
Bedroom – Fluttershy rifling through your underwear.
Shaking your head, you move back to the Living Room camera. The door to the outside stands wide open. That's weird, Fluttershy closed it earlier... Was it Twilight? Probably not. She usually used her magic to get in.That's when there is a rustle from the corner of the room.
Your eyes strain to see what's on the tiny monitor... Then you gasp, wheeling back in your chair. Your eyes are affixed firmly on a pink pony with curly hair, covered in latex and wearing night vision goggles.
Pinkie Pie.
Trembling, you check the right hallway again. Empty. Twilight must have moved on. Opening the right door, to conserve power, you decide to check inside one more time.
Bedroom – Flutters.
Kitchen – Twilight.
Living Room – Pinks.
Bathroom – Empty.
Checking outside, you quickly flip through the outside cameras. Looks like the usual gang is here... but normally you have a forth... You suppose you shouldn't look a gift horse in the mouth.
The next few hours move slowly, but painfully as you check each camera for the movement of the ponies outside. Pinkie seemed to jump between rooms, no matter how far apart they were. Twilight stopped and talked to Fluttershy and you could hear their whispers about a plan.
It set you even more on edge, normally they weren't organized. Normally they would simply hop from room to room and attempt to catch you off guard.
No... tonight... they seemed to have a rhythm. There was something different.
You promptly shut the doors when you had to, but all in all, it was a good night so far. 4AM and 60% power left. You got this.
That's when all three met in the living room.
"Is it time?" Pinkie asked?
Twilight and Fluttershy nodded their heads. You inspected the camera to the Living Room as the three girls then began to give each other signs and nods. They had a code?! Shit.
Kitchen, Bedroom, Bathroom – Clear.
Living Room – The three.
Hallways – Clear.
Backyard –
Your gut drops as you watch a tall alicorn stepping out of the darkness and moving around your home. An... An alicorn? I-is your system even equipped to handle this? You've never been attacked by an alicorn before.
You flip back to the living room, where the girls sit patiently for their guest. Jumping to the front door camera, you remotely flicker the porch light. Purple and pink streaked hair and pink fur is illuminated in the dark of the night. Cadance. It had to be Cadance.
Yet for some reason, you aren't really surprised. Celestia is usually taking care of the sun and Luna takes care of the moon. She was the only... 'available' princess. Kinda. It also likely had something to do with helping them 'love' you. You shudder at the thought.
The alicorn steps inside your home and the three ponies bow to her deeply.
"Good Morning-"
"Where is he?" Cadance quickly interrupts Pinkie.
"In the back of the two hallways... every time we try to get back there, he slams the door on us," Twilight elaborates.
"Hmm... Can he close both at the same time?" Cadance asks.
"Mhm," Fluttershy answers. "We tried rushing them both last night and it didn't work."
"How does he make it work?" Cadance asks. She walks up to one of the cameras and stares directly into it.
"I'm not sure," Twilight answers. "It's something even I don't know about."
"Yes!" You exclaim, feeling proud of outsmarting the local egghead. The four turn to look at you and you promptly clamp your mouth.
"I see... Have you tried... waiting him out?" Cadance asks quietly.
You check the clock. 4:30AM and 50% battery. You got this.
"Go directly to the doors and just wait outside." The pink princess orders the girls.
"Wait, what?" You whisper.
"Ooh! I like this plan!" Pinkie exclaims. “Why hadn't we thought of it before?!”
Suddenly she pops out of view. SHIT.
"Hi Nonny~ Can I-"
Reflexively you slam the left door, and you quickly look to your right, where a yellow pegasus approaches you.
"Uhm... is being scared your-"
Immediately, you slam the right door shut as well. Taking a deep breath, you lean back in your chair. The ponies pound their hooves against the door.
"Let me in Nonny!" Pinkie cries.
"Uhm... Would you open this door so I can make forceful love to you? Please?" Fluttershy moans from the other side of the door.
"Let us in, Anon..." Twilight calls from Pinkie's side.
Cadance continues to stare at you through the computer monitor and a smile forms on her face. Her brow furrows in triumph.
"Don't stop watching me, Anon..." She whispers into the camera. The pounding from the other side of the steel doors intensifies. You watch Cadance carefully and check the time. 5AM. 40% left and dropping fast. What's going on?! It shouldn't be dropping that fast?!
A blue glow emits from Cadance's horn. The battery meter immediately drops to 20%. Your body goes numb as you begin to tremble. N-no. She figured it out. She broke your system! How?! This isn't fair. This isn't how this is supposed to work at all.
"You better not stop watching me, Anon~" Cadance whispers again. The knocks on the door suddenly cease. All is quiet in your security room as the violet eyes of the alicorn peer into your soul. If you keep both doors closed, you are going to run out of power. This was it. This was her end game. The cunning of an Alicorn.
You look at both doors with dread. At least one will have to be opened in order for you to not run out of power. Turning to the left one, you lean in closely to the door to perform your Pinkie test. Clearing your throat, you hum melodically.
"Shave and a hair cut..."
You listen closely. Just barely audible on the other side, you can make out a voice.
"Two bits."
WHELP. YOU AIN'T OPENING THAT. NOPE.
Cadance giggles into your screen. 10%. 5:30AM.
You aren't going to make it at this rate. There's only one solution. You're going to have to check the right hallway camera. Maybe if you do it quick, the Princess won't notice. You hover your hand over the buttons. It'll be quick.
The button clicks loudly.
Right Hallway – Clear
You open the door quickly to save power. Quickly, you press the button to return your feed to the living room.
Living Room – Clear.
Empty.
The room becomes much colder as the screen in front of you glows with a light blue light. The battery gauge in front of you quickly depletes to zero and instead of a red 'empty battery' light, a light blue heart appears. The doors shoot open beside you and you back up against the wall.
Everything in the room goes black as you scramble for the flashlight on your waist. The sound of slowly approaching footsteps moves through the right hallway. With a click, your flashlight roars to life. Flashing it out into the hallway, it quickly is tossed out of your hands with a cyan magic.
"Thanks for letting me into your humble home, Anon..." Cadance whispers, approaching you. Blue magic pushes you against the wall and illuminates the Princess's bright violet eyes. "But I warned you to keep your eye on me," She whispers malevolently.
Oh my goodness, I'm just watching Markiplier play that game just now. Never knew what it was before.
I KNEW this was going to be good! :D
its like "the purge" but sexy. I demand a sequel!!!
i liked the story but would have been better to not rush it so much this first chapter.
would have liked it if he made it with like 10% battery the first chapter then on the second or later have him get saved by the bell (6:00 AM) and then on the third night...well...you know
didnt notice it was one chapter lol. on a irrelevant note, that game is fucking scary as fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck
Also, more would be nice, but [MAY?] get repetitive over with each chapter, or whatever you could plan on doing.
I cannot bring myself to play this game myself for the life of me, and my computer can barely play anything! XD
I just got through this game and I come here to calm down, and then I read this...
Felt his tension throughout the fic and couldn't stop laughing
You should make this a series of all the different ponys trying to get him
That. That was truly horrifying. Even more so when you imagine the crew from Freddy's instead of the ponies. Good jod, I'm gonna' go cry myself to paranoid sitting on my bed, since I won't be able to sleep, G'night.
Shouldn't only moving doors cause power to drop? How does that work just sayin.
This was fucking awesome. You need to make this a series, seriously, this can go somewhere.
No wonder a race of prey can survive in a world filled with critters (I know not all of them are) that could eat them. Most of those predators are probably nocturnal, and they don't want to get raped while looking for food.
never even heard of that game until now.
Best Story Ever
You just nailed Five Nights at Freddy's
Have a fave and a mustache
Well... I have something to think about at school today. So thanks. And great story
please tell me that there's a chapter 2 full of poni cloppery incoming.
As scary and hilarious as this is... it distracts me that the ring-leader and implied reason for this whole bit of of night-lust is Cadance, Alicorn of Love, married mare... unless she's no longer married. *shrug* Plus, I suppose Twilight isn't an alicorn in this one...
That said, I can imagine Luna will have words for the encroachment into her nightly realm.
1,999 words? AGH! Please add, like...an extra sentence or something!
Dear God, please no! I cannot escape from this game...... Guess I have to read it now.
i demand MORE!
My god, it actually was pretty scary, I feel bad for that Mofugga'
Oh gosh this story is too good to not have another chapter.
I really like the main character of this story i feel bad for him.
Sooooooo whats wrong with having sex again does it kill you?
4889605 masturbate. everyday at least once.
you'll get pretty tired of it. i'd assume sex would be the same, except maybe it would take longer.
the fic is okay. the cover sold it for me though.
4889612 Yeah i know that but
Is it really that bad?
4889614 first, your penis starts to feel pain even as it wants to "Stand up"
then climax will take a longer than it should
semen is also decreased
at the end of it all, when you do reach climax, the insides of your penis will feel itchy and it will without a doubt hurt
now take in the fact you have to do it for 4 mares. back to back
not fun
4889618 Implying its only those 4.
But yes now that i think about it that would be hell.
As scary dying is i rather die then suffer pain in my loins.
Haven't read this yet, but from what I've gathered it's probably a lot better than the OTHER fic on this site inspired by the same game...
Just a protip, if you see a story titled "Five nights at Freddie's", don't read it.
My mind was playing a movie from reading this and... damn that was intense. I genuinely had my heart racing at a mile a minute when reading this.
I want you to look up a term: coat tailing.
This is the second or third 'based on Five Nights at Freddies.'
Is imagination painful to you lot, or do just find it easer to jump on the newest thing and drive it into the ground?
The mistake he made was not choosing ONE. Sure you have one love crazed mare for life, but she will help you keep the others away.
One has to wonder, why exactly does it cost power to keep a door closed? I mean, it doesn't make much sense if you think about it. Power for the lights? Understandable. Power for the cameras? No brainer. Keeping a door closed? Something doesn't seem right here.
4889736 Does it have the "disease"?
So... Shining is cool with this?
4889863 So if the building runs out of power, people won't be trapped inside.
I'm imagining Cadence going to lick him when the clock suddenly strikes 6.
Anon: Oh no no no no no...
Cadence: I told you to keep your ey *6 o'clock alarm* Oh, dear, I have to be back at the castle. Well, it was fun playing with you.
*Cadence leaves Anon sitting on the floor*
Anon: ...what the hell was that for?
You always do make interesting stories, Keep it up! You're a Great writer!
4889345
Maybe her and shining are open. Love 'everyone' and all that.
4890033 Perhaps... perhaps.
4889863 Maybe the doors are magnetically locked? That would defiantly take power, and with how fast they close it would make sense
4889981 I'd rather be trapped inside a small dark room with thick metal doors locked shut on both sides of me rather than a building where all the doors open and the lights cut out when the power runs out. Especially if there are murderous robots who either want to take a bite out of the frontal lobe of my brain or stuff me into a suit full of machinery that would pop my head like a grape.
4889913 What?
I saw the title and thought that I've been associating with FNAF a little too much if 'One Night at ____' made me think of it. There's no way that's a 'Five Nights At Freddy's' story, I thought to myself; I'm just being paranoid.
Hehe, hehe.... heh...
...
I might need psychiatric help.
Damn man, I thought he was going to make it.
I was literally cheering the guy on.
4890070 It would depend on the type of magnets. Unless there's a specific system in place the robots would either have the door slam itself shut on top of them or get stuck in the doorway. Personally I would just wait until they appeared at the door and then start repeatedly mashing the door button forcing it open and closed on top of their heads until they were thinner than paper.
4888468 I know right? Amnesia doesn't really scare me, but FNAF, yeah...that scares me.
Alright I'm getting sick of this Five Nights shit
This is fucking awesome, now I HAVE to check that game. Can't believe I never heard about it before.
4890335
You and me both, but the clop one is the worst for fucking up every aspect of the game, and made by an author who has nothing but overrated clopfics
4890335: Agreed
Okay, it was funny. I'll give you that.
BUT! Why is rape okay in Equestria? Or is there going to be a sequel where Anon sues everyone? Cuz I would totally be down with that.
This is SO Five Nights of Freddy's vibe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I needed that before going to bed :CCC
DON'T PLAY/WATCH THAT GAME BEFORE GOING TO BED!!!