Awesome

Freddy vs Jason?

Yes! One where one of the princesses actually listen to the protagonist.

4944496 YOU GET A COOKIE!!!!

4946910 It really wasn't that hard to figure out considering that there was only one movie where two serial killers face off against one another.

4948710 ...............Oh.
My bad! But I've only just gotten into slasher films so I've only seen the franchises of those characters.

But still...YOU WON A COOKIE!!!
Plus this

I can't wait for more.

4948879 only just? You have been missing out my friend. Welcome to the club, but if you intend to try to use knowledge of horror from slasher folks I suggest using beginning films exclusively. If your gonna using something from Friday the thirteenth take from the first cause that is the best. Also, something I recommend for everyone is to look at reviews and critiques. They tell you what worked what didn't work why they don't work and point out problems you may not notice you use but other will. Plus critics like the nostalgia critic is are hilarious and very useful

Okay time for actual criticism. Your going way to fast, Luna believed something that preemptively attacked her over her sister pretty quickly. Now would have been a perfect seen to spring an exposition filled sort of flash back. Or have Luna actually question her sister as he points out faults she knew of but didn't think of. And I doubt he would drop his guard that quick cause Luna said she would give him a chance or if so give us a little more emotion.

This story could use more detail also, you could show us a little more of how well his mental fortitude is so it's believable that revenge isn't so completely all consuming obsession that tree we knob

Yep. Bitch in Equestria story.

Slow the fuck down. It seems like you trying to rush it.

Luna looks like a guy in the picture. Seriously she does.