She is a princess, a ruler, and a teacher. But there is something that Celestia has always wanted to be, and a little colt will be the one to give it to her.
Hold on a second. Was this premiediated? I mean, I guess I'm all for jumping straight into the scene, but what's the context? How did Cadence and Shining already know everything we do?
Dude, you need to slow down the sex scenes. Look, your descriptions are excellent, for real! The scenes are highly erotic, but they go too fast. One or two paragraphs should not be the entirety of whatever the act, be it blowjob, oral, anal, or whatever. I realize you may want to bang (lol) these chapters out to us faster, and we do appreciate it, but take a bit more time and stretch out the sex.
I am now wondering if Princesses Celestia, Luna, Cadence and even Shining Armor are this sex crazy does that mean When and If Drizzle meets Princess Twilight will she be as sex crazy when it comes to Drizzle
5014532 If Twilight isn't the only one to raise a huge red flag out of the royals I'm gonna call bullshit... Twilight always seemed like the type to well 1: Be really against doing stuff like this and 2: Probably upset that this little colt is gonna thing everyone in his life wants to fuck him... well when dealing with politics... yeah I can let you all make the joke there for yourself.
5015153 I somewhat imagine this being how the conversation.
"Celestia can I ask you something? "Yes Twilight? "Um... yeah... about Drizzle... WHY IN THE NAME OF THE ELEMENTS OF HARMONY DID HE EXPECT ME TO MATE WITH HIM?!"
Strong Hoof was the main character in my very fist story, Chains of the heart. It was a flop. In three months I had ten views and five dislikes, but it motivated me to wright better fics. Dashing hearts, my Luna series and so on. But I always wished that my first fic had taken off. It was full of feels, and Strong Hoof was a scrappy fighter who had trouble dealing with the death of his little sister.
GAHAHAHA that was so funny when celestia starts crying though in retrospec i highly doubt shed cry like that but lets throw logic out the window and make way for comedy lol
Aww, now I have to wait another chapter for the mounting. Ah well it was a pretty good chapter overall.
And here I thought that it was only the princesses. Adding Shining somehow ruins it for me.
Hold on a second. Was this premiediated? I mean, I guess I'm all for jumping straight into the scene, but what's the context? How did Cadence and Shining already know everything we do?
im so fucking hard right now
Dude, you need to slow down the sex scenes. Look, your descriptions are excellent, for real! The scenes are highly erotic, but they go too fast. One or two paragraphs should not be the entirety of whatever the act, be it blowjob, oral, anal, or whatever. I realize you may want to bang (lol) these chapters out to us faster, and we do appreciate it, but take a bit more time and stretch out the sex.
Really hoping those 'body modification' spells come into play next chapter
*Hint hint* Shining and Drizzle pussy...
5012636 I didn't really get a sense of it being too fast, but I guess I can see where you're coming from.
I am now wondering if Princesses Celestia, Luna, Cadence and even Shining Armor are this sex crazy does that mean When and If Drizzle meets Princess Twilight will she be as sex crazy when it comes to Drizzle
5014532 If Twilight isn't the only one to raise a huge red flag out of the royals I'm gonna call bullshit... Twilight always seemed like the type to well 1: Be really against doing stuff like this and 2: Probably upset that this little colt is gonna thing everyone in his life wants to fuck him... well when dealing with politics... yeah I can let you all make the joke there for yourself.
5015078 I hope your right
5015153 I somewhat imagine this being how the conversation.
"Celestia can I ask you something?
"Yes Twilight?
"Um... yeah... about Drizzle... WHY IN THE NAME OF THE ELEMENTS OF HARMONY DID HE EXPECT ME TO MATE WITH HIM?!"
5015160 I can actually see that happening if that is the case
I hope at one point Strong Hoof will play with him cause he is used in the story every chapter so when can he get some
5012333 magic
fucking god speed cadance......
5012333 didn't celestia send some letters informing cadance about her new son/relationship in the previous chapter?.....
Strong Hoof was the main character in my very fist story, Chains of the heart.
It was a flop. In three months I had ten views and five dislikes, but it motivated me to wright better fics. Dashing hearts, my Luna series and so on. But I always wished that my first fic had taken off. It was full of feels, and Strong Hoof was a scrappy fighter who had trouble dealing with the death of his little sister.
Oh well, time marches on
GAHAHAHA that was so funny when celestia starts crying though in retrospec i highly doubt shed cry like that but lets throw logic out the window and make way for comedy lol