Let's just say that voices in your head, and toasters, lead to Weird Things.
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The grammar you used for the intro makes it difficult to read. Could you please adjust it so we have a better idea what your story is about? Thank you.
4871497 could I get some pointers? becaus i can't do grammer worth a damn.
Alright I will see what I can do.
Change this to:
This:
There. I hope that helps. I would recommend trying to find someone to proof read your story.
Good another story! Sadness sice I want more that I can't get now:(
4871543
Grammar nazi
And it fits the situation
Suddenly, rainbows.
I truly can't understand why this story has such a horrible rating. I'm honestly surprised. It certainly is a good story.
Why do I think of this when I think of explaining the internet?
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Cookies if you know where that is from.
5497567 star trek the motion picture?
ha..haha...MWHAHAHA Dont mess with us humams Nightmare! We posses the darkest things the universe over has to offer within our minds. BEHOLD FOURCHAN
Dude. Get an editor.
So what you're saying is:
... Wow this is uh... Poorly paced and unedited.... Actually this is starting to remind me of those parody movies, and I don't think it's supposed to.
5497567 Lego movie?
Wowza, this story could use some editing.
I lost it...
suddenly, rainbows?
i got something better
Catch the Rainbow, Taste the Rainbow.
Either:
The result of a year of minimun to no combat exercise in thousand yearts, considering the peaceful land equestria is and Celestia not being the type to "To have peace prepare for war" then it means she probably only ate cake and gawked at annoying nobles, leaving her very ill-prepared for a fight against her sister in her younger years.
Nightmare OP please nerf, Hasbro pls.
6219341 you monster
sickening, keratin
and spiralled
you're in there