I deleted my comment because that joke wasn't funny an hour-ish after I posted it, dood.

This is good I'd like to read more stories in this particular setting(anthro Equestrian girls?).

4858428 If I hit another brick wall, dood. The setting will grossly vary form whatever I feel like at the time of me hitting said wall.

Hm... this should probably be added to Futaquestria or whatever it was called. Also, love that Futalight Cockel line.

4858502 I kinda don't wanna join that group because they improperly tag their stories, dood. Like 6 fics in the Twilight Sparkle folder that don't actually have Futa Twilight Sparkle, dood.

If someone wants to add this to their folders... go for it... add it to any group you feel like this story would fit in to, dood.

4858528
Yeah, I've noticed that too.

If this is going to be a series, it would probably be best not to mark it as complete.

4858793 I guess... I only had it on complete because it's just a thing for more giggles than any other story I write, dood. Hell... this story's update schedule might be worse than Misadventure's.... knowing me I'll be jumping to this a lot, dood.

can someone please tell me what Futa means?

4858835 Futa is the short word term for Futanari which is the japanese term for 'Dick Girl' or 'Hermaphrodite', dood. Basically a person (or pony) that looks like a mare but also has both male and female sexual organs.

Oh boy!

This certainly is something that goes to my favourites box.

4858858 Sweet, dood. I love it when a story I wrote goes into someone's favorites!

Oh, I'll be watching this for new stories. Damn that was hot.

4858863 Thanks, dood!

4858867
Funny, I actually have your story, Twilight's Misadventures in my read later list, just hasn't gotten around to reading it yet. Now I'm going to have to!

4858874 I can promise you a clop scene in every chapter... whether it's hot or not is personal preference, dood. Sorry in advance if you don't like them.

4858879
No need to apologize. If it is add well written as this was, in sure I'll enjoy it.

What can I say, Twilight cockles warms the cockles of my heart!

Also it's bizarre as I don't know what, so there's that too! I'll have to add this to my "Read Later", since I'm in a bit of a rush right now. Update will be coming soon dood, don't you forget it!

Moar clop by Fusion Fool? Yes please.

This sounds like a win. Going to favorite to watch and read a little later!

You da real MVP...

The dood abides

You know, if this is the kind of thing we can expect from you when not working on the other story then I am perfectly fine with that.

4858970 Futalight Cockles warms the cockles of my black heart too, dood! I hope you enjoy it when you get the chance.

4859168 Super glad you liked it, dood.

4859169 It kinda looks like win, but... I could be wrong, hope you like it, dood.

4859391 Sweet, dood

4859437 Thanks, dood!

4859564 I'll try and update something when I can, dood. Cherry Jubilee's chapter is becoming a problem for me at the moment

Hmm, Anthro tag... why the sudden switch FF3? Are you planning on doing any future chapters in this style as well?

4859792 The Anthro tag is there in case people yell at me for having an Anthro chapter without the Anthro tag, dood. The chapters will be different each time... with how Cherry's chapter is going... I'm tempted just to write another chapter now, dood.

4859808
In that case, it might be better to just use single chapter tags like that in the chapter title, along with any other triggers, i.e. "First One Shot (Anthro)"
That way you can keep the story tags for things that apply to everything.

In all seriousness... I hope those eleven dislikes are from people that hate futa or clopfics or both and not... ya know... actually dislike my story for how it went, dood.

4860852 I had dislikes on a story because it had a human in it as a surprise twist at the end. Don't worry about it. ^.^

RD is beeing quite the jerk in this chapter, she is really asking for a punch in the face.

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4861575 Wow... that's pretty lame, dood.

4862875 Sorry you see it that way, dood. Rarity will do something about it behind the scenes, Rainbow is just a little bitch when alone with Rarity after all.

4863311 Yay, I won't get eaten, dood!

Mmm, gotta say that chapter was hot as Hell. ^.^ I know it's going to be a random assemblage of futa Twi stories, but that chapter so needs a sequel with an orgy between all 6 of them. Maybe involving Rarity's leather.

4863694 Maybe one day, dood.

4863694 Just when I got him down, I read your comment and he jumps back up! img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130110012350/random-ness/images/e/e2/I_ain't_even_mad_will_smith.png

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This was...interesting.

I mean, I'm not a clop fiction writer at all, and my interest in the genre is rather minimal, but I will admit to have been around the block a few times, and know what works in this kind of story.

On the one hand, you're honest with your audience in the rather obvious fact that this is a PWP (Porn Without Plot aka Plot What Plot), which is good. Often I've seen fics that claim to have an overarching plot, but are really just PWPs with lots of padding. So points for honesty.

As for the clop itself...it could be better. Its always over far too fast, and feels rather sloppy in the writing style. Maybe because this is a PWP, and therefore, while again, honesty is a great policy, as is straightforwardness, if literally everything is just sex, it does tend to get boring after a bit. Sometimes, a bigger, larger plot would be better, allowing us to properly 'get to know' our futa friends, and some non sexual interactions/character developments that is nice and fleshed out. That way, when we do get to the clop, you can get away with it being nice and graphic, since you'd maybe only have one major scene per chapter.

I'm probably really investing far, FAR too much thought into this, but I will admit the basic idea (half of the group is futa and the other half isn't and the shenanigans that insue) would work great as a running series of one-shots with a lose overarching plot. Kinda like the actual show, albeit with anthro futas and orgies.

4864709 Thanks for the comment, dood. Let's dive in shall we?

When it comes to this kind of stuff, I usually don't like people being the the dark or deceiving people, thus.... I'm generally honest with them about stuff... this becomes problematic for when I wanna do a surprise but end up spoiling it in the comments section... like in Twilight's Misadventures, I spoil that Minuette is a futa and that Roseluck was a semi-stalker before I changed her to a shy girl with a crush, dood.

Even though I write clop, I'm not too great with descriptions I find. And I usually write the first word that comes to mind (Uttered, said, as, feeling, and some others that I use more than I should be) but for the clop length.... I find it hard to extend clop length when for a paragraph or two, I'm basically stating how X is fucking Y in the ass/mouth/pussy/tits/thighs and I kinda don't like that so I try to give it at-least a page or 3/4 of a page on the google.docs before a character orgasms, dood. While I could probably do more with the plot or what not, I struggled to keep the word count down to be honest, I really didn't want to think about an actual story, just sex school shenanigans based on pictures done an artist I like(who needs to do more FutaTwi pics), dood.

I might delve back into this "kind of thing" between the six schoolfilies of the first chapter again... but not for a while unless I get the urge to do that, dood. Again, the purpose of this story is to give you guys clop while also getting me into the mood to continue my Main story.

But... I do like these long comments, wish more of them would happen, dood.

4864754 Oh well you're welcome my friend.

I love making these kinds of comments, but I'm usually too tied up in my own work to make time to do more reading.

One problem. Just one. . .

Dood? DOOD?! It. IS. SPELLED. DUDE. D. U. D. AND A FREAKING E!

Other than that I rather enjoyed this. Though it may be a little rushed.

4867479 I wrote this in a day, dood... then had it proof-read over the course of two days, so yeah... it was a bit rushed, dood. And the D-O-O-D thing is a prinny thing, I get a lot of people thinking I misspell the word dude, but it's on purpose because my character is a prinny, and they have to say dood in all their lines.

4867703 what. Is. A. Prinny?

4867760 A Prinny is a fictional race created by Nippon Ichi Software to be the mascot for the series Disgaea, a JRPG that is similar to Final Fantasy Tactics but takes the attacks to a absurd levels (ie Using the Moon to hit your foes, dood). The Prinny is the soul of a human that had sinned in their life and was encased in a leathery penguin suit that had a fannypack on their front and small bat wings capable of hovering. They are enlisted to do all the dirty work most demons don't wanna do such as cleaning, cooking, assassinations, and other stuff.... they are essentially Toad (from the Mario games) except prinnies are treated like crap and are paid extremely little, commonly a single sardine for twenty hours of work, dood.
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Fuck misadventures, this the real story! (Misadventures still Roxors my bloxors though, dood)

Give us more, Dood!

ps. Here, have a Scoota-Prinny.
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4868632 Sorry, dood. Misadventures is still my priority, but I'll tell you that I'm working on both a Misadventure chapter and a chapter for here, dood.

4869164 I'm trying, dood. And Thanks!

4869630 This was awesome, dood!
Give us more!
~DOOD

*Sees new story* Damnit Fusion! This is just gonna distract you from Twilight's Misadventures and House of Sparkle!

*reads new story* DAMNIT FUSION! UPDATE THIS AT THE DETRIMENT OF EVERYTHING ELSE NAO!

Seriously though, good show you little psychotic demon penguin thingy you.

4859647 Oh I did! It was a good one, delivering what we were promised! Cockles everywhere, with ponies snooPING AS usual I see. Would fave again!

4873725 Another one is like... on the way, dood. It won't be as long... but the smut pretty much starts like on the third paragraph, dood. Thanks for liking this

4879508 I'M SORRY, DOOD! I had a build of ideas that I wanted to throw out there and I was running into walls in the Cherry Jubilee chapter, dood. I'm almost done that one then I'll work on the Mini-Series chapter, dood.

4892252 I would never lie about the lack of Futalight Cockles, dood. The internet needs more purple unicorn/alicorns fucking everything with their futa dicks... and if it's properly written, maybe the odd Dusk Shine... maybe, dood.