Determined to embarrass Scootaloo into no longer wetting the bed, Rainbow Dash enacts a plan with the reluctant help of Twilight and Applejack. Unfortunately for Dash, things don't go quite as she intends.
I half-wonder why Rainbow Dash forgot about the "the pony in charge may ignore any given rules"-rule, since that's easily exploitable, but then again, loyalty is her thing. Makes me wonder how that little part will play out.
Good work so far, and, as far as updates are concerned, I don't really care if it's only happening once in a blue moon, as long as you manage a semi-regular schedule.That shit be important, yo.
One pony, whistling cheerfully as he pulled his cart of cabbages down the road, turned at the sound of something tearing down the road. His eyes widened when he saw the carriage, set for a direct collision with his cart. “My cabbages!”
Hooary for the Avatar: The Last Airbender reference. I'm interested in seeing how Rarity plays into all of this.
But if you’re not going to do it, I guess I’ll just tell Applejack.
That foal store clerk is right AJ really is the mommy in all this. I kind of hope Scootaloo wets the bed this time too, starting down a path that results in Applejack taking care of them both. Reinforce those sisterly bonds and all But Scootaloo should definitely get to change Rainbow a few times before then,
Wow. Any doubts I've had about this story after reading the first chapter are completely gone. The way you wrote this story definitely made it one I'll have to remember to read. Not quite a favorite yet, though.
I have to question why Rainbow would drink so much before bed... Is she simply too incompetent to realise the correlation or does she simply not care?
Anyway, another great chapter full of many references (actually, only two that I recognised and one homage to the previous chapter) and more jokes and humour. I am finally ready to read the next chapter! Which will, unfortunately, have to wait until tomorrow. I am far too tired to comprehend any more reading.
A good second chapter. And with this, your story have earned my Fav.
*smokes confiscated weed and shoots Rainbow Dash in the knee with an arrow* teach you for stealin' my sweetroll
You're gonna pay for this!
AMAZING!!!!
I love this!
Great chapter. That was a clever thing you did with Rarity and the dress!
5007927 I just have to wonder if that's going to pop up again later on, when Rainbow Dash is more "foalified".
I don't think Tyrant hoof is telling the truth. I think constant nagging a pestering for updates makes him write faser.
Just like last chapter, Rainbow is going to wet the bed AGAIN!
Dash drinking so much cider...it's like she wants to wet the bed!
And nice touch with Rarity turning the tables on them with the prank!
I half-wonder why Rainbow Dash forgot about the "the pony in charge may ignore any given rules"-rule, since that's easily exploitable, but then again, loyalty is her thing. Makes me wonder how that little part will play out.
Good work so far, and, as far as updates are concerned, I don't really care if it's only happening once in a blue moon, as long as you manage a semi-regular schedule.That shit be important, yo.
5012940 Well technically Scootaloo is in charge now.
5046421 Yup, I can't wait to see her use them on Rainbow Dash to foalify her.
5047719 Oh hell yeah I want to see her foalify even more.
I think I skimmed it a bit to much but...
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5072106 You will, in time. All you need to know right now is, things aren't going to work out like Rainbow Dash has planned.
Hooary for the Avatar: The Last Airbender reference. I'm interested in seeing how Rarity plays into all of this.
I have one major problem with this fic.
I have already faved it so fimfic prevents me from doing so again.
Next chapter housten we have an ETA of 4 months Nah im just playing with you... seriously though
This line amuses me greatly:
That foal store clerk is right AJ really is the mommy in all this. I kind of hope Scootaloo wets the bed this time too, starting down a path that results in Applejack taking care of them both. Reinforce those sisterly bonds and all But Scootaloo should definitely get to change Rainbow a few times before then,
Heres hoping this will have an update soon! You, young story , are going straight to my tracking folder!
So when is this going to update? This is a really good story, and I hate to see it waste away like this.
Wow. Any doubts I've had about this story after reading the first chapter are completely gone. The way you wrote this story definitely made it one I'll have to remember to read. Not quite a favorite yet, though.
I have to question why Rainbow would drink so much before bed... Is she simply too incompetent to realise the correlation or does she simply not care?
Anyway, another great chapter full of many references (actually, only two that I recognised and one homage to the previous chapter) and more jokes and humour. I am finally ready to read the next chapter! Which will, unfortunately, have to wait until tomorrow. I am far too tired to comprehend any more reading.
i like this chapter