Oh my gosh. oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh!!! This, this... this! THIIIS! Everything! Everything!!!! Everything is in my list of fetishes! GLORIOUS TITS! Lactation! Hmmm-heheheh, and that cliffhanger! Oh gosh, this is too much, I cannot contain my joy.... it's... it's... too mucH!
4881133 ... if the first few words of the neck chapter aren't *WHAP!* Derpy: Oh my gosh I'm so sorry! Carrot Top: Derpy? What is this? Derpy: I-I'm sorry I didn't mean to hide this Cue awkward line of dialog that ends with Top being giddier than a school filly to know her potential lover could actually be the 'male' she has dreamed of I will be slightly disappointed.
Not by much but, slightly.
And then there would be sex, glorious sweaty futa sex that would make them question their location when it happened because of the sand in their privates.
4881227 man, and here i thought this chapter was kinda lacklustre. all buildup and no climax and all that. glad people are enjoying it, the next chapter should be much better!
4881228 well, suffice to say, top's not exactly gonna be turned off, or else there wouldn't be a story. everything else, you'll just hafta wait and see!
4884188 would you believe this was originally supposed to be a one-shot of derpy fantasizing and then they go to the beach and fuck? it kinda got out of control. just a bit
4961888 there's technically a titjob in chapter 2! it's a fantasy, but it still is described in detail, so fuck it it counts.
4970716 your anticipation gives me the motivation that i need to go on, kawaii hank hill. thank you for the kind words.
5004882 when i looked at the notices and saw "AzureDreamer replied to your comment on sex on the beach" my first thought was this "I wrote a comment about a fruity drink?" Then promptly fell out of bed laughing at the stupidity of my unintentional joke.
5032356 man, ive been having a shit week here (what with the hard drive failure thing), but if someone were to do that itd make up for it a little. or at least point kevinsano to this.
5050232 Man, I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this. I have been waiting forever to read a good futa Derpy, and now I finally have this. However, when is the next chapter going to come out, cause that is when all the good stuff happens.
But it was too late. The magic stopped working, and Carrot Top was smacked in the face by two and a half feet of horsecock suddenly coming into existence.
5392295 yeah, stuff happened. i do have good news though; chapter 4 is probably going to be going up tomorrow. i have the entire sex scene written and just have to wrap up the last few loose ends n' shit.
5452575 nah, 's cool. this fic was supposed to be finished back in september of last year but technical difficulties got in the way and kiled my motivation for like an epoch.
but the fic is all but done at about 2.6k words, minus the actual ending. i feel confident that it'll be up sometime tomorrow, at the latest on monday (depending on how work goes)
I hate to drop a spoiler, but I'd just like to point out that Top's statements when the sex scene is firing up could be read as her declaring intent to rape Derpy if she was not willing.
The first thing instinct did was decide that the shirts had to go. She wanted to see those glorious tits in all their glory in the flesh. She reached down and grabbed the bottom of Carrot Top's shirt, roughly yanking it up. She broke the kiss only for as long as she needed to to pull the short (shirt) over Carrot Top's head before removing it completely. She resumed the kiss as she reached behind Top's back to fiddle with her bra.
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wish granted! chapter three is up. now to work on the climactic sex scene that your'e all looking forward do
you evil bastard! leaving us with such a tantalizing cliff-hanger!
Not something I ever expected to read.
Oh my gosh. oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh!!!
This, this... this! THIIIS!
Everything! Everything!!!! Everything is in my list of fetishes!
GLORIOUS TITS! Lactation! Hmmm-heheheh, and that cliffhanger!
Oh gosh, this is too much, I cannot contain my joy.... it's... it's... too mucH!
*makes random noises while faliling around*
....
Okay, I'm okay, I'm okay.... but....but... this... thiiiiis!...
-Zeph
4881133 ... if the first few words of the neck chapter aren't
*WHAP!*
Derpy: Oh my gosh I'm so sorry!
Carrot Top: Derpy? What is this?
Derpy: I-I'm sorry I didn't mean to hide this
Cue awkward line of dialog that ends with Top being giddier than a school filly to know her potential lover could actually be the 'male' she has dreamed of I will be slightly disappointed.
Not by much but, slightly.
And then there would be sex, glorious sweaty futa sex that would make them question their location when it happened because of the sand in their privates.
More more more more more MORE.
Oh and good luck durpy your gonna need it.
Well shit.
And here I was expecting Top to be knocked out by Derpy's dick.
K.O!
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Kinda the opposite for me, I'm surprised it took this long!
I used to be a clopper like you, then I took a dick to the face.
4881228 I really hope that tit jobs and anal sex are used.
Can't wait for the 4th chapter. I'm so excited for it.
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4881227 man, and here i thought this chapter was kinda lacklustre. all buildup and no climax and all that. glad people are enjoying it, the next chapter should be much better!
4881228 well, suffice to say, top's not exactly gonna be turned off, or else there wouldn't be a story. everything else, you'll just hafta wait and see!
4884188 would you believe this was originally supposed to be a one-shot of derpy fantasizing and then they go to the beach and fuck? it kinda got out of control. just a bit
4961888 there's technically a titjob in chapter 2! it's a fantasy, but it still is described in detail, so fuck it it counts.
4970716 your anticipation gives me the motivation that i need to go on, kawaii hank hill. thank you for the kind words.
5004882 when i looked at the notices and saw "AzureDreamer replied to your comment on sex on the beach" my first thought was this "I wrote a comment about a fruity drink?" Then promptly fell out of bed laughing at the stupidity of my unintentional joke.
What about anal? Also, how do you like my phoenigriff OC? I am going to miss the bat wings.
5004882 Danke for replying, and Kawaii Hank Hill will always follow you.
5004882 If this becomes a comic one day, I will cry with glee.
5032356 man, ive been having a shit week here (what with the hard drive failure thing), but if someone were to do that itd make up for it a little. or at least point kevinsano to this.
that last line wish it was me, not carrot top
5050232
Man, I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this. I have been waiting forever to read a good futa Derpy, and now I finally have this. However, when is the next chapter going to come out, cause that is when all the good stuff happens.
FALCON PUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNCH!
Hahahahahahaha! Couldn't resist.
super-liking this and wanting more. when is the next chapter coming...no rush though
5050232 When is the final chapter?
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If you didn't say it, someone else would
5280027 good news! i have some time off of work which i've been devoting to writing. the final chapter should be sometime this week.
5285023 hooray
5285023 4 weeks later...
TELL ME WHEN THE NEXT CHAPTER IS GOING TO BE FINISHED, DERPY'S 30 INCH COCK IS TOO GOOD TO RESIST!
5392295 yeah, stuff happened. i do have good news though; chapter 4 is probably going to be going up tomorrow. i have the entire sex scene written and just have to wrap up the last few loose ends n' shit.
5452340 Awesome. Sorry if I came off as rude, I just meant light-heartedly.
5452575 nah, 's cool. this fic was supposed to be finished back in september of last year but technical difficulties got in the way and kiled my motivation for like an epoch.
but the fic is all but done at about 2.6k words, minus the actual ending. i feel confident that it'll be up sometime tomorrow, at the latest on monday (depending on how work goes)
I hate to drop a spoiler, but I'd just like to point out that Top's statements when the sex scene is firing up could be read as her declaring intent to rape Derpy if she was not willing.
Otherwise, good scene.