Amazing job for the first two chapters
You've earned your thumbs up along with favorite mark.
Just keep 'em coming, will you?

448291 Thank you very much!

I'll try my best to, though I'm not the fastest writer!

Don't listen to Gary, he can be crazy sometimes. (see what I did there? *nudge nudge*)

lol

But anyway, welcome! Oh and yeah if you haven't already join the group, we're all pretty cool people.

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I see! Thanks for the tip gents, I shall join the group right away!

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Thanks! Seems like a very nice family!

Hey look it here more FoE I come from a group of writers that help edit among others we are on a live chat that get published on EqD every now and then so come join us everyone there is a editor or writer or both. So come join and open the chat we don't bite.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KaoFWVlFlMjYR2KmTWxwCYnvTZQcjEULO9YHSaqqk9U/edit

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I actually do pop into the Compilation Gdoc on occaision to see what's going on! I need to hang out there more often.

Thanks for the link though, Scully!

477100 ya you will see me in the doc ulmost every time you go there.
Im scullyshobnob.

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Ahh, I thought your name sounded familiar, I have seen you in there before!

My name in there is anthony_barron, really wishing I could have chosen a better one!

482050 lol I see ok and you can change it.

Great story soo far! keep up the Great work, i think i might change my OC ( Capt) from current equine times to F.o.E times, itl make my imagination have to work!

Loveing the story

I'm working on Ch. 3 as I type this. I know I said I was a slow writer but jeez, I'm breaking records here!

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Glad to hear you like the story! You could always have two versions of your OC though, one in FoE time and the other in regular time.

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Glad to hear!