Spike joins Twilight and the girls to a diplomatic meeting in the conservative country of Saddle Arabia. There, he meets a woman more beautiful than he could ever believe. But, as he is soon to find out, every rose has its thorns...
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Another grea chapter but I think there was a slip up,
I'm not sure but I pretty sure something is out of place here.
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Gdocs musta fucked it up when it copied over. I'll get that fixed in a lil' bit. Thanks, pal.
Spike my buddy you are growing Imma so proud of you. Be strong Spikeroo you can do it. great chapter by the way now I finally know the girl's name. GO SPIKE the Dragon of the sands
This scene contains a lap dance.-1 sin
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You good sir... have just won the internet today.
Dayum, man...gotta love them sexy exotic dances! I meant 'exotic' as in 'not from the same place', not 'shake yo ass for cash' exotic.
Merc has done the impossible. He's made an oc which actually feels like a real character.
This story was rather enjoyable, till Spike meet that dancer. Maybe it was the large age gap that you kept reminding us of. Or maybe it was just the final thing that made the story not worth continuing.
As I said it was fun to read, but it wasn't without its issue. The big one being AJ and Rarity, they didn't seem to care who they affected with constant flirting and what not. It kept reminding me of one of those couple that make out in public and openly talk about what they did to each other last night.
It got old really quick.
Plus t h en both do it in front of Spike. Which is just messed up.
Another, was that Spike was such a pushover that was just pathetic. I understand trying to be supportive and such. but to openly admit you're an errand boy was just too much.
And lastly, I know this is a bit of a nit pick. but the fact that you constantly mentioned that Spike has no attraction towards his female friends. now I'm not saying he should be all oggeling them; that would be weird, but to have no reaction to seeing someone of the opposite gender in various forms of dress. Or to have the individual not react to Spike seeing them in such a statex is just odd.
Its loke they don't even see him as a man. Which, when you think about is pretty messed up.
Man, this is so well written. You really brought that dance scene to life. Loving Spike and Amira's chemistry btw. I'm already loving this as much as The Laughing Shadow, and I loved that story to death. Can't wait to read more!