I WANT MOAR!

4716810 I will post the second one after my trip. I will be back in August. However, I may be able to get in another chapter if I get some free time on my vacation.

4716942 Aww i don't wanna wait that long…...

Since you're basing Button and his mother on the characters adapted (Button) by and created (mother) by JanAnimations, you should probably try to keep the language used as similar. The main thing that stuck out at me was your use of "mommy" and "mama", when Button would normally say "mom".

Well, I was aiming for a cute-sy shota feel. I want to leave the gamer puns out of the first chapter, because it loses that intimate, romantic feeling. But as you can see, I've tried to include that personality in the first chapter. It's difficult, I had to choose between the inner frailty of a child who is attached to his mom, or the jokey, fun-loving personality we all see in Button's Adventures. For a romance, the former seems more natural, right?

I read this story so well, its not even funny. Like what the hell, I never thought I could read a clopfic sooo...good.

4725404 Thank you very much, Cumulus. I felt like this went a lot better than my previous story, Daylight Terror.

i can't wait for the next chapter this turning into a great story

2nd Chapter is on the way! Just need some editing, and it'll be ready for your pleasure! ;)

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I assume that's a pun.