Awesome! Another great story created by you epic mind! :)

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Very nice! But...second half? Only two chapters?

Also...

seems to be having difficulty reaching her back with the lotion. That’s my queue to step in, picking up the tube of lotion and

Should be "cue".

bikini is getting in the way, and I know she doesn’t want an uneven coat. I hook the cloth in my claws and give it a warning tug. With no objection from Zecora, I’m free to slide the bikini off of her shoulders. I see her arms quickly

Wasn't it a one piece suit?

I usually stick to common themes in my stories

Yeah I noticed

Very awesome and hot.

4686509 Thank you for the check. I took care of it.

Considering the fair amount of Zecora x Spike fan art floating around, I'm surprised there are more ship fics. Maybe it's the difficulty of Zecora's rhyming :/ though there are ways to change and work around that, personally I like idea of having use the rhyming to get ponies to take her more seriously.

All that aside, great fic and it's well written enough to where you don't need to read the previous entries to understand what's going on here. Just assume it's a preexisting ship and that characters are on vacation...which is still technically true. Also strawberries.

4687516 You don't say? I would personally try to devise an event where Zecora would stop rhyming, and feel free to stop like a normal zebra.

To Marik:
Btw, I love your work, keep it up.

Nice.... Very Very Nice

Man n' it was gettin to t good stuff too but, i'm sure they'll pick up where they left off later anyways

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Need leads to Greed, leads to Seed?

4692403 I prefer
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4702351 Sorry, Didn't think I would be that small.

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Bread and butter.