An old threat has come back to conquer Equestria. But this threat will throw our favorite ponies into a fate that nopony saw coming. Can our heroes overcome the challenges that will test their will and friendship?
Updates weekly on Sunday Nights.
A little bit of background: This story I plan to last at least 35 chapters. I will do my best to release at least one chapter at least once a week. I came here to get some basic reviews on the story and see if people liked it. Please feel free to comment your honest thoughts. This is one of my first attempts at creative writing...and lets just say the other attempts did not go well XD.
This is dedicated to my Dog Dusty Moore. He passed away in mid June from a brain tumor. A 7 year old miniature schnauzer. He was there for me when others weren't for many years.
This is rather good. I approve.
daang. shiz just got real.
Interesting ill keep my eye on this story oh chapter 1-2 is the sae just saying.
Seems rushed and messy, but it has potential. I don't know why you created a time limit, but I am certain that is the source of the being rushed issue. I honestly would suggest giving yourself 2 weeks if you must have a time imit, but I'm not you. I will be rooting for you and I hope you improve.
P.S.: Try beaking the body of the work down into more paragraphs and having a blank space in between the paragraphs to make it easier on the reader.