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Dark Space: Maramura

This is my first attempt at writing and I am just experimenting with the idea.
I don't expect raving results.

This is the story of the sole survivor of the "attack" on the NLRPC Maramura.
Follow burning Dawn as she dictates the events surrounding the indecent that led to the deaths of thousands of ponies in this spin-off of Dead Space.

Art: http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&q=planet+cracker#/d2zszcq

Chapters (2)

Introduction · 11th Apr 2012 · 355 words
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Chapter 1: How I Got Here · 13th Apr 2012 · 1,018 words
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Astra Nomical

Astra Nomical #1 · Apr 11th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1: How I Got Here ·

Being a huge fan of the Dead Space series, seeing a ponies spin-off of the series was both unexpected and massively interesting for me

I really like the characters you've portrayed so far (Burning Dawn is a great name by the by ) and the story even does justice to the Dead Space series in my opinion.

The writing is par for the course in comparison to what I've seen before (Which isn't always a bad thing) but trust me, keep doing it, and you'll improve.

However, you must check your spelling darling and you must refraim from making the ponies sound like humans EG: "coffee in one HAND, checklist in the other"