Dis gon be good

4675780 Dis is gon be good.

4675818
Yep

At least we'll learn how Alicorn's preen their wings. The pleasurable way!!!

How far you have fallen, my friend

4675919 Not far enough.

4675919 I'm not even mad. I'm just plain disappointed.

4675948 May I ask why?

Since the *ahem* "climax" of this story has been given away in the description and in the cover art, can we get a confirmation on if this will end up being long-term polyamory or if a pairing will be brought about by such intimacy.

I'm mostly asking this because this seems at first a one-shot, but after the end of the first chapter the story looks like it could take anywhere from one more to almost four more chapters to reach said threesome.

4675948 As Para said, just how far you have fallen down the path of the dark side of fanfiction, abandoning any effort at something worthwhile and resorting to simple pandering clop.

EDIT: Whoops, replied to the wrong post.

4675961

4675973 Ah, I see. Well, this idea has been sitting on the back burner of things to finish writing for a while now, so I figured I'd get off my lazy ass and actually get it out. Yes, while my last five story submissions have just been simple clopfics, I do have a couple regular stories in the works that still need a lot of development, but my main story pretty much takes up all of my time. I'd much rather finish that one first before I move on to another full-length story.

4675988 You're heading down a slippery slope. Right into

The Abyss.

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You can't resist preening.....

4676243 Your profile picture fits the comment.

4676330 Why thank you good sir.

4675965
im sorry did you just make a pun good sorry because that would make a conversation take flight

Nice story,
Too bad its not going anywhere.
EDIT: Wow this is actually a new story.
Are you continuing this any time soon?
(I know that I'll Always Be Here For You is top priority.)
RE-EDIT: Wow, this just came out, I feel stupid xD

Funnily enough, the sheets matched her coat color perfectly. In addition to that, thick, comfy-looking cushions lined the walls of the room. In addition to that, there were a pair of chairs in the opposite corner sitting between two large bay windows that provided her with a fantastic view of the city.

So, here we've got a bit of awkward sentence structure. First off, it is a bit weak; funnily enough seems kind of random here, it isn't even all that odd given that it is her room, set up for her. Secondly, you had two sentences in a row start out with "in addition"; starting even one with that is questionable, but both is moreso.

She knew full well what a wingboner was, and that walking around with erect and throbbing wings was definitely unbecoming of a princess.

Throbbing? Really?

Her heart rate quickened and her breathing became short and fast as she started thinking about how she could make herself cum just from preening.

Am I crazy, or does it bother anyone else when "cum" is used instead of "come" in this sense? It isn't wrong, it just bothers me for some reason. Dunno.

Probably am crazy. I am reading this for some reason, after all.

Oh right, because people are snarking on it.

Anyway, I think some of this feels kind of... eh. The text isn't anything realy beautiful, and I didn't really want to wank to it (though maybe I was just overthinking it). I was amused by the concept of Twilight being turned on by reading a story about Cadance being turned on by preening, it was a kind of funny meta thing, but the story as a whole was only... eh.

Also, I have to admit that seeing things like

love juices

Makes me kind of chuckle, and not in a good way. Like, it feels a little try-hard.

Anyway, grats on getting featured again (and getting Obs to snark about you in a blog post). Speaking of which, I was actually wondering: I noticed you advertised on reddit as well. You add to a bunch of groups. What else do you do to promote your stories?

A few grammatical hiccups, but overall a neat chapter. The idea of wing stimulation is very interesting. Almost makes me wonder if it wouldn't hold any truth. Can't wait to see where this goes.

Temptations of the Flesh

But I thought this was about preening. I came here for an intellectual story about the strenuous and sometimes slightly arousing process of preening. But instead I am given this.

I am disappointed in you, Abyss. Disappointed.

4676576
You didn't know that wings can throbe? See, in the Equestrian universe, pony wings contain no bones at all!

4676945
It isn't finished, and he's working his way up to it and not rushing or suddenly letting it happen.

4676974
I probably wouldn't know that because I never read the story. I am simply commenting on a story by a guy I love to mess around with. He is probably my favourite writer right now simply because he is so enjoyable.

Oh, um . . . I really hope senpai doesn't notice me. . . .

4676992
Ah, a usual timelord...of course you would do such a thing.

4676951

Throbe

Is that like some sort of erotic strobe-light effect?

4677036
Shut up. I looked at that word for so long and thought, "Something's wrong here." But then I said, "Fuck it."

As a friend, don't make the terrible life choices I have.

4676951

See, in the Equestrian universe, pony wings contain no bones at all!

What's this then?
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4677164
Cartilage.

4677170 ... Touche.

4677170 You sir have bested me.

Well, this looks interesting...

Damit. I was going to use that picture.
And the same idea. Darnit.

Well it is better that what I would have done

4677297 Legos :) i hate emh :)

Yeessss... yessssss.....

4676047

4676576

Speaking of which, I was actually wondering: I noticed you advertised on reddit as well. You add to a bunch of groups. What else do you do to promote your stories?

Seriously?

4677487 then why are you hating me. It is just a name

Damnall the groups were added in the exact same amount of hours. I mean, Jesus!

4678350 Who said i be hating on you?
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This happen to you Trying to search for that Damm peace all along it was in the other box?

4678445 all my pieces are either build or in one shoe box

Her curiosity getting the best of her, she skipped the first five chapters and went straight to chapter six.

this would be me

4678453 Huh well mine was In a large plastic box And when you exedently Ehmm tipped The box the legos all over the floor and if you missed one Happy Time

4678519 I know how you feel. And don't forget when you try build something from scratch and it isn't coming together how you want it, so you scream profanity and punch the failed creation. I don't know if this has happened to you, but it sure as hell happened to me.

4676992
You have 250+ followers.
You have been noticed plenty.

4678571 Hmm I still have ...4 large boxes of legos left? i dont know how many but when you step on lego Well then ALL HELL BREAKS LOSE wait... :) i have a fanfiction idea

4675988 Ooo. Another continuing fic by the Abyss. I can't wait for the next chapter.

LEGOS

4678617
I have 215. If I could pull up that weird followers scale, I think it might say something like "Getting There." 300+ is being truly noticed. But I don't care either way. People come if they want. Pun intended.