What do a dead pegasus with a gut-full of liquid rainbow and Discord's stolen statue have to do with each other? More than Equus could ever imagine. What he finds in a Manehatten factory, and in his father's past, will shake him to the core
Man, it is so AWESOME how you piece together the story from the beginning of the chapter to the end. The way you introduce plots twist at the end of each chapter is not only necessary, it un-ravels the mystery in a compelling way.
Man, it is so AWESOME how you piece together the story from the beginning of the chapter to the end. The way you introduce plots twist at the end of each chapter is not only necessary, it un-ravels the mystery in a compelling way.
Nice job.