A young teenager named Mikari Otohime is struck by lightning and sent to Equestria. Upon realizing she's been turned into a pink-and-black Alicorn, she's more annoyed than freaked out, because pink is still a Main Character trait.
Besides, this isn't the first time a Narrative's pulled her into a new body or world, and if she can get back home, it most likely won't be the last.
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10/10 would read sequel.
4610250 D'awww....
I might have to make this my own storyverse... Ponies in the closet. It's like Narnia, except the idea that it was like that didn't pop up in my head until just now. Frick!
Tgis was suprisingly touching, Im not sure what to say about it but, i really liked it. Good job!
4610623 Thank you! Still trying to get a feel for my own style of writing, and maybe doing dry pieces like this are what I need.
Wow. Deep.
The very act of daily life is part of Narrative. In fact 'you' are the main character of the story.
4611242 Yeah, I know, right? I edited one of my aunt's favorite sayings to make it more story related, and that's what I got.
*Grins* Cute and sweet, bravo.
4613988 Thank you! I really wasn't sure if I was doing it right.
Then again, I never really do know if I am or not. 
4614977 That's a normal state of being.
A fascinating exploration of fourth-wall awareness. The idea of a meta character seeking sanity and normalcy is a very intriguing one. What if there were a story and the hero never showed up? Trick question. Not making a decision is still a decision, and avoiding your own story is still a story.
Fantastically done. I like how Equestria as a whole is just a narrative device is the greater insanity that is Mikari's life. Pinkie Pie is best mentor character. Thank you for this story, and best of luck in the judging.
4642218 Thank you! I think that, just as the title of this is prologue, this might be just the beginning of my telling her tale.
I did try to keep Pinkie's medium awareness kinda low key but still show it off. No one's commented on the sentence I expected then to, so maybe people are understanding my non verbal tells! That is almost better than winning a contest if true. Almost.
Got a broken Center code in there as she wakes up in Equestria.
4647307 A'ight, thanks!
Excellent. I'd definitely read a longer fic based on this concept.
4660745 Awesome! I've been thinking about doing so, so look forward to it coming out sometime before the 2016 holidays!
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4661719 Deconstructionist fics are one of my favourites.
Reading a few chapters of MLP Time Loops might give you a few ideas too. It's significantly different from your concept, but has that same metafiction feel and is also a good laugh.
4661939 Then you underestimate my favorite's list, because I've had it favorited since it was in its infancy.
And yes, I love deconstructionist fics as well.
Oh, hey, thank you Blueshift. Here's to hoping the prologue is just that, because while it's a self-contained tale, it's also a tale begging for extension! One that quite frankly would do just as well deciding to stop deconstructing tropes and morph into a more normal if self-aware tale, as it would for it to continue fighting against fate or making its own different yet still compelling version.
4722068 Yeah, I'll probably rewrite this one to give it more length and to better set it up as a clear and definite "the end," while still leaving room for a sequel.
Basically, I want to give it a Lion King ending. And I say that because Lion King's the only movie I can think of that Disney ended while already planning a sequel, but would still work well as a stand-alone.