Derpy flew off as fast as possible to her own house, bumping into everything on the way. “Why I am not smart? Why do I always ruin everything? Why? Why? Why? Why?” Derpy looked up and realized she was holding a knife. “Why is there a knife in my hoof? Would I make Ponyville better if I killed myself? Everypony hates me. Rainbow Dash doesn’t even say hi to me anymore…”
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You're right, Derpy. Kill yourself.
4583811 Where is this hate for Derpy coming from exactly? Rainbow Dash will find you and make you 20% cooler by makng you love Derpy.
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>Speaking in memes
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Good Idea for a story. Could've been really good but... The pacing and spacing wasn't very good. Good job though.
4585565 Thanks!
Sorry pacing isn't really my forte. It is one of my biggest weaknesses in writing, but I aim to improve and tbh this isn't my best work but I like it. I'm better with pacing in multi-chap fics but it still is a problem.
Ahhh isn't that cutest thing ever the beginning made me really sad but I wuv it tho :3
Really? I guess I'm up for some golf, if you must know.
4694414 Glad you liked it and it was supposed to make you sad, until the end of course, as the end is meant to be happy.
4695651 Ooook, try commenting on whether you liked it or not... Seriously after what I just wrote that what you just had to say?
4695750 No, seriously, I loved it. I just wanted to point that out.
4695891 Thanks! It is my first Derpy Dash story so I had to put that in there.
4695942 Great first story. I guess it was a fanwinct- a wa– I got nothing. Ok, it was a win, you get the idea.
4583811 You're an ass.
4696192 It wasnt my totally first fanfiction I have written. Far from it in fact, but it is my first fimfiction
4695891 Ignore him, there are haters in every group, believe it or not.
4763703 By Celestia you are right! I'm mad I didn't see it before.