Established Applejack/Fluttershy ("Appleshy") relationship. Set after The Return of Harmony. Themes: Remembering, consent, love.
Once more Fluttershy is on her back looking up at Applejack. But this time, the two of them are by themselves and they have none of Twilight's magic: only their own.
Your writing style shows promise, but I think it could be a good idea to have more content before publishing, rather than putting up itty bitty fanfic bits like this.
Keep going, you've got great potential!
This was a nice story. I wish there was more, but I really enjoyed it, especially Fluttershy's reasoning as to why she asked Rainbow's permission to hold her down.
I'm a fan of flash fiction, and I have to say I love what you get across in these.
i may be wrong but in my opinion it coud have used a little more, something, but other than that it was wonderful
It was short but sweet! I very much enjoyed the interaction between them.