Nice lead in and follow up for the story

This intro into the story was handled wonderfully To quote Rarity/Elusive, "Simply divine darling!" I wish I had half the writing skill. All characters seemed quite in character, considering this is a clop fic I consider that a feat that makes the story that much better when achieved. Now onto the actual clopping!

Very cringe-worthy dialogue, and out of character terms and phrases coming from elusive. Unfortunate that I couldnt finish it.