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Human in Equestria16,983 stories ·16,830 members

The Great Pony War

Luna discovers a dark secret about her sisters rule, and takes steps to distance herself from the corrupt Celestia. With neither sister wanting to resort to violence, Equestria falls into chaos.

Author's Note: This story is a collaboration between Tnuyum and I

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redskin122004

redskin122004 #1 · Apr 29th, 2012 · · ·

Ok. love it.
Just hate one thing.
The Pinkie Pie 4th wall rape fest.
I hated it so much that i actually skipped several sentences and paragraphs
Everything else was great but that part.
Avoid it or at least not blow it out of proportion like you did with it and it will be great!
Keep it up

Mr. D the Pony

Mr. D the Pony #2 · Apr 29th, 2012 · · ·

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I could see where that would be excessive... Anyways, won't be happening as much, if at all really after this chapter. It'll mostly be limited to just large quantities of knowledge she shouldn't have. Thanks for the advice!