Yeah, I wouldn't worry too much about dialogue for Zecora. It's probably very tedious to ensure that the last words for her sentences rhyme. Isn't it a little weird that Zecora seemed so willing to do that considering she taught Spike to 'Purge his desires'?
Dude I'm just glad your back,please don't do that to us again I love these stories of yours. Really enjoyed this chapter, just wish you had included that spike zecora scene.
Very good chapter, excellent story. That said, look over your work twice, I found several times you misspelled something and others where you even left words out. I got what you were talking about, sure, but it's still a mistake.
Oh, cool, a new chapter! And there's AJ-
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*skip the whole cloppity clop scene with favorite pony*
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(disappointed Applejack fan noises)
So you return, with an excellent update and marvelous job writing this chapter
Yeah, I wouldn't worry too much about dialogue for Zecora. It's probably very tedious to ensure that the last words for her sentences rhyme.
Isn't it a little weird that Zecora seemed so willing to do that considering she taught Spike to 'Purge his desires'?
Dude I'm just glad your back,please don't do that to us again I love these stories of yours. Really enjoyed this chapter, just wish you had included that spike zecora scene.
YAY ITS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I just hope you include Zecora x Spike scene in the next chapter.
Next chapter better be them going at it at start uncensored or everyone is going to be pissed.
Pleasure island was a great story mate
Hotness with this chapter; it was worth the wait.
Very good chapter, excellent story. That said, look over your work twice, I found several times you misspelled something and others where you even left words out. I got what you were talking about, sure, but it's still a mistake.
since this is a prequel will you make a sequel to the first story of this series??????
So, I am going to assume that the original story is part of Celestia's 'Grand Master Plan'? Was the ending of that story part of it as well?
Is the sequel going to come out after this story is done, or before the last chapter is out for this story?
is cherilee going to came in after zecora, or are you just using her as a side character for good use of a good cheating?
welcome to my club. i love her but when i have her in my stories they either die or come to a complete halt XD
Blush...I always found Zecora to be the hottest in anthro form and you rendered her extremely well here. I can't wait to read what's next fully
And kudos on rendering her ryhmic speech pattern so well, that must have been hard to do to this scale