I have gotten my revenge, I have stopped Damien, but many things were lost during all of this. My family and my friends. One I thought was my friend betrayed me in the end. Jordi... where are you now?
Aiden was walking the streets of Chicago, trying to be incognito. The buildings were a little run down, but there were civilians everywhere. "People are giving me strange looks, well I have been shown on the news. Hopefully they don't remember that." Aiden said to himself. His phone vibrated and he took it out of his pocket, it was giving him a reminder saying 'now: buy two bouquets of roses', Aiden started walking towards a flower shop.
Aiden started walking to the flower shop and since he didn't have anything to do, Aiden pulled out his phone again and scanned people. Tom Walker: just been hacked, Christopher Johnson: Just got fired, Savanna Tall: Waiting for video game, and Tyler William: Friend was kidnapped. He arrived at the flower shop after scanning them.
A few minutes after buying some flowers, there was another buzz. He checked his phone and it said 'now: go to cemetery'. He started to tear up remembering the two days. He arrived at the cemetery with no intrusions, and walked up to his neise's grave and set down one of the bouquets on top of the gravestone. He sat there for a minute or two remembering the car crash. He got up and slowly walked to another grave. He sat down the other bouquet on top of the gravestone. "I'm sorry I couldn't protect you Clara. Heh, if I knew that you were the one leaving the flowers on my neise's grave, I would've appreciated you more." He said to Clara's grave.
His phone buzzed once again, he took it out of his pocket and it said 'crime detected'. "This city couldn't have given me moment, huh?" Aiden said to himself. He ran out of the cemetery and found a parked car, he took his phone out and unlocked it. He started up the car and drove it towards the scene, he arrived about 50 seconds later. Aiden took out his phone and turned on the profiler, he saw a man named Chris German, 'potential victim'.
Aiden waited for the crime to commence, Chris didn't even take a step for a gun to be pointed at him. Aiden was fast, so the criminal never shot, but he ran. Aiden wasn't gaining up, but the criminal did run into a few people. The criminal tried to shoot Aiden while running. He missed and Aiden was finally catching up. Aiden caught up after a few more seconds of running and knocked out the criminal, but from the adrenaline and gun shots, he didn't know that someone has called the cops. "Shit, they're going to think it's me, I gotta get out of here." Aiden said.
Aiden ran back to the car he left behind, while the police used the CTOS scanners. Right as Aiden got into his car, the police were in pursuit. Aiden quickly floored the gas pedal and went racing down the road. Not even 20 seconds and there's 3 police cars behind him. Before Aiden passed a traffic light, he hacked it, destroying the third police car while the other two passed in time. Aiden turns into an alley way and hacked the blockers the alley way had, destroying bothe police cars, but a helicopter was sent and four more police cars sent after him. Aiden decided to hack a bridge, he did and went airborne. He quickly looked back and saw that his plan was successful, but the helicopter was still on him. He took out his phone again and disabled the helicopter. Aiden quickly got out of the search zone, leaving the police behind.
Aiden got out of the car and his phone buzzed again. It wasn't a warning, call, reminder, or anything. It was just buzzing and had these flashes and glitches, it also showed some random people on their phones. What got him intrigued by it was tht it showed ded sec, defalt, and Jordi. His phone just shuts off afterwards and did nothing else. Until the screen glowed purple and was shaking tremendously. Soon it was shaking Aiden's entire arm and he dropped it, it didn't break even though it fell on concrete. There was a bright flash, so bright that Aiden couldn't open his eyes.
{10 minutes earlier}
{Ponyville}
Twilight is running around the library panicking and yelling "WHAT IF IM NOT READY!!"
"Twilight." spike said trying to tell her something.
"WHAT IF I DIDNT STUDY ENOUGH!!"
"Twilight!"
"WHAT IF I MESS UP!!"
"TWILIGHT!"
"WHAT IS IT SPIKE!?"
"The princesses have been here for 2 minutes."
Twilight looked up to see princess celestia and princess luna standing at the doorway with worried looks.
"Hehehe, umm... sorry." Twilight said blushing a little from embarrassment.
Applejack walked up to twilight "Are ya sure ya can do this Twi? Ah know you're a princess and all, but ya said that it takes a lot of magic."
"I can do this, I just need a lot of focus to pull this off." Twilight said
Rainbow dash looks up from her daring do book and said "Yeah, umm... what are you doing again?"
"I told you that it's an inter-dimensional spell that will bring objects from a different dimension to us."
Rainbow raised an eyebrow, but then shrugged and looked back down at her book.
Twilight still looked uncertain about this spell and celestia noticed. Celestia walked up to twilight and nuzzled the side of her head. "Twilight, you're May faithful student and I know you can do this and so does luna and your friends." Twilight looked around to see luna smiling and her friends smiling as well.
Even twilight couldn't help but smile, she took one last look at the book. The spell was so complex that even celestia could barely remember it. Twilight closed her eyes tightly and her horn light very very brightly, the room turned dark and everything started to glow purple from her horn. Everypony gazed in astonishment, except rainbow who was still reading her book.
As twilight was about to finish her spell, celestia and luna were astonished by the energy twilight was using and was still conscious.
"WOAH, NO WAY!" Rainbow yelled from her book. Twilight's eyes snapped open and her aura engulfed herself and there was a flash. After the flash went away, everypony glared at rainbow even the princesses. "Hehehe... sorry... wait, where's twilight?"
Everypony looked around the room and noticed that twilight is nowhere to be found. Celestia's and Luna's eyes got wide as plates.
"Where is she? Twilight! Twilight darling!" Rarity yelled out.
"She's not here." said luna
"What do you mean she's not here? Is she at sugar cube corner?" asked pinkie pie.
"No, she has crossed dimensions." said celestia with a sad nod from luna
"Oh... my... is there a way to get her back?" asked fluttershy
"Yes there is, we just need the...... book." said celestia looking at a a book that was burned in half and so was the desk.
"Wow, good thing we stayed out of the blast radius." said Rainbow "wait, does that mean we can't get twilight back."
"Yes it does, let's hope that twilight remembered the spell and gets back." said luna.
Everypony looked down and fluttershy was on the verge of tears afraid if twilight doesn't remember the spell, then she wouldn't be able to see her friend ever again.
hwat
4482941 what?
This is an injustice.
4482948 Yes, that's what I said
4482982 you sir are a hacking god... sorry I couldn't help myself but to say that.
4482985 wait, what?
4482998 get hakt.
Good idea, but it really requires some fine tuning.
4483007 NO I HAD $2000 DOLLARS IN MY ACCOUNT
4483027 tuning?
Wat
4483065 I think he means editing.
Please fix the grammar, I love the concept you're having in your story.
4483362 okay that'll be easy
Was wondering when the first MLPxWatch_Dogs cross would come out. While this does needs a good round of editing, it's interesting enough that I'll keep an eye on it.
good story only complaints i have are that of spelling errors capitalization errors (you got to capitalize the pony's names) and everything went to fast
4484508 too fast? It's exactly what happens in the game to tell you the truth and it has to have a pony on earth and inter-dimensional travel is tough.
4483065 Slow down the story, describe the environment and actions of nearby people better, check for proper grammar and spelling... In case it was TL;DR, refine the story.
4484974 You make a good point. I'll do that ASAP.
4485021 he basically said what i meant but i didnt go into details sorry anyways yeah describe stuff it should slow down the story and make it go at a good pace for the reader
4486319 Thanks, I think it'll help
hmm story appears a bit newbish but i must read further
4487386 newbish?
This is ridiculous and you should feel bad for writing this.
1. Yes, you are the first one to make a Watch_Dogs/MLP crossover.
2. Great story but requires a tad of fine tuning. I suggest finding an editor to give it a once-over and make a few corrections here and there (or do it yourself if you don't want one and have enough time)
3. I demand copious amounts of MOAR!
4488040 I think they mean stuff like punctuation, grammar, spelling, and details (I forget how much or how little your story had of this) basically anything a writer without a editor/writer that hasn't been writing for very long can mess up on.
Come on update
4509592 YOU SHOULD BE ASHAMED TALKING DOWN WATCHDOGS!
4741140
You can't bash someone for their personal opinion. I honestly don't like the game that much. And btw, the story could use some work, mainly the spacing, punctuation, and transitions.
Why does every good story stop or just take a long time to finish?
Is this the ending when Adrian killed Quinn or not?
5187119 this takes place afterwards, so it's a what if future story
Hello? are you there? if you can hear me please uppdate this.
THIS STORY IS GOOD, I DEMAND MOAR *Smashes computer*
shit