Luffy breathed deeply. Discord was splayed out along the ground near him, unmoving aside from the occasional twitch. “What a weird guy. Wish he’d kept the clouds though.”
A bright light appeared to his left and he raised a hoof to shield his eyes. Twilight and her friends dashed out the light. A golden tiara adorned Twilight's head and necklaces hung around everypony else's necks.
“Princess!” Twilight called out. “We came as soon as we saw th- huh?!” Twilight looked over the bizarre scene in front of her. “What… what in Equestria happened? Luffy, why are you here? Where’s the Princess? Why is Discord beaten to a pulp?!”
“Yeah!” Dash flew over to Discord and prodded him with a hoof. “This guy was supposed to be our job.”
“Oh.” Luffy nonchalantly looked at the ponies and smiled. “He was being a jerk so I beat him up.”
A few of the hairs on Twilight’s head went crooked. “You did what? He’s the embodiment of chaos! He’s an all-powerful entity based on a primordial force of the universe!”
“Um, I didn’t get most that, but it’s not like beating up gods in new to me,” Luffy replied while picking his nose.
More parts of Twilight's mane went crooked. One of her eyes twitched. “How can you act that calm? For crying out loud, he’s Discord! One of the most evil forces to ever threaten Equestria!”
Pinkie happily bounced around doing a victory dance. “Oh, don’t get so mad Twilight. We didn’t even need to use the Elements this time! I say we party!”
“I’m up for that.” Luffy’s tongue wagged like a dog’s. “He may have been a jerk, but he was a tough jerk. It took a lot to knock him out and now I'm hungry!”
“Um, girls.” Rarity trotted forward. “Perhaps we are speaking a little too soon.”
Nearby, Discord slowly tried to crawl away with a single paw. “Damn pirates. So unpredictable, that’s my job! Ugh, I’ll never bother with them again! I’ll just have my own kingdom here and…” Dash's hoof slammed down in front of him and blocked his meager escape. “Of course you’d be here." A white flag materialized in his claw and he weakly waved it. "Uh... truce?”
“Blast him!” Fluttershy yelled. All six piece of jewelry glowed and unleashed a rainbow beam on Discord. In a flash, he was back to being a statue.
Stars of wonder had replaced Luffy’s eyes. “So cool!” He ran up and looked at the statue and then at the girls. “That was awesome! What was that?”
“Elements of Harmony, dear,” Rarity explained. “They’re special weapons we have to use against threats to Equestria. They also make quite nice jewelry on their own.” She twiddled the diamond shaped jewel around her neck.
“Neat! Where can I get one?”
“There’s only six,” Twilight said. “I'm not even sure if they’d work with other ponies. Hmm, guess it would possible for other ponies possessing the proper virtues to use them.” Twilight slapped herself across the face. “What am I saying? You need to explain what happened! Discord doesn’t just break out of his prison on a weekly basis! Also, where is Princess Celestia? I feel she could explain things much more clearly.”
“I am right here… my faithful student.” Celestia stepped out of some nearby shadows with a depressed expression on her face. She glared over at Luffy. “There is much to discuss.”
“You still wanna fight? I may be hungry, but I’ll take you!” A little bit of steam came out of Luffy’s nose. He shifted his stance and braced himself to launch an attack.
The other ponies’ jaws dropped at this. Celestia sucked in her breath and then released a deep sigh. “No, as much as I regret to say this, I am in your debt. Had it not been for you, I am not sure what would have happened to my sister.”
Luffy relaxed and his expression softened. “Oh yeah, is she okay?”
Celestia blinked. “She will be fine. That spell was only meant to temporarily bind beings with my level of power.” She looked at the six mares. “Only the Elements have the power to permanently imprison such powerful beings.”
Twilight nervously trotted up to Celestia. “Princess, could you please tell us what’s going on?”
Celestia had a look of pure stress on her face, but then she relented on closed her eyes. “Yes, Twilight, I deserve to tell you the truth. Your ability to still use the Elements has proven me wrong.” She paused again. “I’m sorry my little ponies, I’ve lied to you.”
“What do ya mean?” Applejack asked.
“I shall tell you from the beginning.” Celestia looked up at the stars. “Allow me to bring light to both the world and your questions.” She closed her eyes and then the dawn came. “To start, we must go back six hundred years to a time when chaos ruled the land.”
Question does Celestia hate Pip (in this fic)? He dressed like a pirate... and told Luna she was better than Celestia.
Edit: Congrats on getting the box-thing
why you take so long... UGGHHHHH
"what One Piece story doesn't have a tragic flashback?"
True. True. I'll be waiting...
Way arc doesn't have a flashback is a better question. Now remember Beautiful lady swordswoman with a ton of meat.
We need Sanji here. He'll turn to rock in an instant.
Haha! Wait till he hears 80% of Equestria is female. "To hell with All Blue! I WILL LIVE HERE!!!"
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I don't think ANYTHING could be better in Sanji's mind than the mermaids on Fish-Man Island
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Aaah, but in this story, he hasn't seen them yet, now has he?
But you're right. Dem mermaids were hawt~!
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Wrong ;) There was Kokoro-san and Camie. Granted, one of those mermaids almost made him hate them for good
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Oh yeah
For him, Kokoro-san was like a near-death experience...I loled so hard when it was revealed she was a mermaid.
I loled when Zoro met Camie- MIND WIPE!
Luffy... ponies... I MUST BE DREAMING!
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I enjoy one piece but they seriously have to many damn flashbacks they had an entire fucking flashback arc
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For the most part I enjoy the flashbacks are they're were some of the best character development takes place (Chopper, Nami, Robin, exc.) It's kinda funny then that I find the weakest character flashback was Ussop's as he gets by far the best character development evenly throughout the series (not just a big burst like Robin or Nami).
That said, yeah, right next to Skypeia, the Sabo arc is one of my least favorites. Why? Because we never heard of Sabo before Seriously, even Dadan got a mention here an there before the arc, but Sabo? The guy who's a blood brother to Luffy just pops out of nowhere... guh! It's almost like some other series I could think of.
One piece is still awesome though.
669325 yes and i hope to see some more ass kicking in the future
("Blast him!” Fluttershy yelled.)
I lost my shit
Like so
669325 Just wondering: What would be your favorite arc then?
For me it would be the whole Enies Lobby arc.
FINALLY
Reads
Worth it.
668856 My thoughts exactly.
669325 "It's almost like some other series I could think of."
>Implying Shining Armor
669836 I think that's probably the best arc too, but I wouldn't put it past Thriller Bark. Thriller Bark is probably the most entertaining arc, the only problem being there's no real character development. That's the only reason Enies Lobby still tops it imo. I don't really want to pick a favorite arc though, comparing them just makes some look bad. In reality, they're all good and I enjoyed them all, just some more than others.
how do you think the elements would work outside Equstria?
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actually was thinking of another anime. I have very different expectations between western animation and anime (yes, I'm a hypocrite for saying that since DBZ probably has a continuity with more holes in it than Chrysalis's legs)
669836 Enies Lobby easily. Amazing characters, fun fights, and possibly the most epic final battle/speach I've seen in a show (seriously Luffy vs. Lucci was insane.) I look forward to the dub starting up again in August
670051 I'm coming up with this on the spot so it might suck and I'm not going to bother thinking about it: The elements would all be devil fruits that apply to each element. Magic is a little broad to come up with a simple answer. Loyalty would be something along the lines of making and keeping friends. Honesty would be the ability to perceive the truth. Generosity would serve out generous beatings. Also people would give things to you? I don't know, like I said I'm not stopping to think. Kindness just makes everyone stop fighting and love you, sort of like how Hancock is. Laughter would make everything you do hilarious. IDK. Whatever.
That is all.
671796 Loyalty is super glue so people really stick together
671822 lol definitely
Pirate ponies
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good.....good it took me some time to read but good...
Now I am looking at it
Kindness Chomper
Loyality Zoro
Honesty Sanji or Brook
Generosity Robin
Laughter Ussop
magic Luffy
Well to celebrate this great fic heres some Music.
“Um, I didn’t get most that, but it’s not like beating up gods in new to me,” Luffy replied while picking his nose.
Luffy replied while picking his nose
while picking his nose
With a hoof? I don't even...
2264171 umm... maybe he stretched his hoof so far that it was small enough to use as a finger?
2264171 he's made of freakin rubber, and can stretch and slim his size, ya he can pick his nose with a hoof
2264171 Rubber nose.
You mean the point of time when Luna was still on the moon? You might wanna put the clock a bit farther back than that.
3005733 oh yeah, in the s4 luna was with celestia when they defeated discord
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Devil fruit! Alakazaahm!
Luffy is supposed to get tiny after gear second...
Edit: I was wrong. Gear third shrinks him, my bad
...Equestria was free of discord's rule six hundred years ago... That was the middle of Celestias solo reign of Equestria while Luna resided in the moon. You would have to go back about 1200+ years or something if you want Discords years of chaos.
And so we have a curb stomping, Element style!
BLAST HIM#
Ok, just read this chapter, and I have a few questions.
1) How did Discord get freed so easily? If all it takes is one hman arriving, then the elements are much weaker than you are letting on. This makes Luffy so OP that he isn't Luffy anymore.
2) Why is Discord being so stupid as to fly around and hitting Luffy when he could use his newfound and unexplained freedom to think up a new plan for taking out Celestia. Hell, why is he still in statue mode? Why hasn't he bomcome flesh and blood.
3) Speaking of wich, why did he get miffed at being called weird? Wouldn't he take that as a compliment?
4) Why did Celestia fire that spell when she KNOWS Discord could block it? She has fought Discord before, she knows his powers and knows the elements are the only things that can take him out.
5) Who is this guy and why is he wearing Luffy's clothes? Because last I checked, even with Luffy's Haki, he can still be taken out by a little bit f the mind control. This is just making Luffy into an OP idoit and I get enough of that from reading Von Doom's work, thank you very much.
6) what is up with this fight? This was like the second lamest Discord battle in the history of Fimfic, ever! Discord is a reality warper, you already showed that. That means hat he can just make somethings appear. Discord knows about Devil fruits, and if he doesn't, why not? He knows about the Straw Hats, This 'fight' should be over in five minutes
LUffy: Gummo Gummo no-"
Discord: nope! *Puts on seastone cuffs8
Luffy: *Faints*
7) The whole entire, breaking out of the mind thing. Were you trying to be insulting to a show you love? OR just the characters? Because when you do this, you are not making Luffy out to be a badass, you are making it out to be "See, Luffy's better. MY show is better!" You had the potential for Luffy to do some good soul searching and have the girls help him out of it, together. But nope, you had Luffy do it in one go. So, why should I, as a reader, have to worry about Luffy. IT will all be good, just slap some Haki on him and he won;t be affected by anything.
8) Why is Discord here? Were you just lacking for characters for Luffy to beat and this was the first on that somes to mind? IF you wanted to have Luffy prove himself to celestia, why not fight a giant Ursa? Or a mecha made by the Flim Flam brothers? OR about a billion other things that you could have pulled out for this one. This was not Discord and was a complete waste of his character.
9) Why is Discord being physical? This is related to my previous points, while I don't mind Discord kicking ass, he is also a manipulator. Why not mes with Luffy some more. This feels less like you wanted to tell me a story, and more like you wanted to insult Discord.
Please note, I don't mind the Celestia bits. I am ok with it because she is a Warlord and yadda yadda. But this...this is just a badly written part of what could be a great story. This was just baaaaad. And while I am grateful for the Elements, I feel like you just threw us fans a bone.
Shy?..... uuh.... seems a little OOC for her to yell to blast Discord.... she is shy, not brash....
But hey, your story