The beginning of the end
What would you do?
If everything you know was taken away?
Smashed to pieces before your eyes?
If you don't know, then you wouldn't be in my situation right now.
Lost in a world of death and destruction, that is where me and 60 others are right now.
My name?
Is Turbo. I will tell you the story from the very beginning, as far back as I can remember.
A black wavering abyss, that's all I could see as I woke up, I tried standing but a force pulled me back down.
"What the-" I asked as I tried again, failing the second time. This time my body felt like barbed wire was cutting me and ripping pieces off of me.
"Do you remember?" A distorted voice asked in the distance.
"Remember what?"
"That day, the day of your death?"
My vision faded."Turbo! Watch out!"
That voice... it sounded like-
"Answer the question!" The voice demanded growing more distorted.
"I don't remember anything!" I said truthfully.
"The day of Darkness?! The Never War?! The wars that don't exist! Tell me why they're here!!!"
I growled at this. "I don't know what the BUCK you're talking about!"
"Then who am I, Turbo?" The voice asked. The source of the voice began walking out of the shadowy abyss. In a few seconds I saw a dark blue pegasus in front of me. His cutie mark was three sixes. The pony had teal eyes that matched mine exactly, his wingspan was much larger than mine. I only knew this bastard by one name.
"Nightingale..." I growled narrowing my eyes as I tried to stand, the pain increased tenfold forcing me down again.
"Aww, isn't that cute? My own son remembers me!" Nightingale laughed insanely.
"What do you want?!" I asked angrily. The very thought of Nightingale as my father just made me want to-
'Calm down Turbo, just calm down. Remember what Jon Bucker told you, don't freak out over things you can't control.'
"Well, since you asked nicely, I'll tell you. This war, The Never War was not supposed to happen."
"And how do you know that?!"
Nightingale smiled at this. "I have seen the past, present, and future. This war is in none of them." Ramblings of a madcolt, I might as well ignore him.
"I want you, my son to find out the reason behind these wars."
I felt the barbed wire feeling go away, with the sound of chains rattling, allowing me to stand up. I turned my head enough to look at my back. I felt something warm and wet running down from it and my legs. I cringed when I saw holes and deep, ugly, scratches along my back.
I growled and turned my head toward Nightingale.
"JUST WHAT THE FUCK WERE YOU-"
"And to assure your allegiance to me." Nightingale lifted his hoof, the bottom of it began glowing and fired at me sending me flying back at a lightning speed skidding to a stop yards away from my father. I sat up and looked right where my neck met the rest of my body. Right there was a necklace with an obsidian chain that was dangerously close to my neck. The gem at the end of the chain had a mark, no, the mark, his mark. The mark of death, the mark of The Beast, the three sixes that were Tirek's number were sitting right at the end of this dreaded chain of destruction.
I looked away from the dark force that had me to hear what Nightingale had to say.
"That, my son, is the assurance that you'll do what I want. That necklace is the same that The Dark Ones worship, if you don't complete your task within nine years, that necklace will overload your weak little heart with Death Magick, destroying you and all your insides, making you into nothing more than a hollow shell to be stuffed and placed in a museum exhibit." He laughed insanely.
"You-YOU LITTLE SHIT!!!!!!" I yelled at Nighingale running to him. I jumped and lifted my hoof to punch him. But before I could land a punch on him a tremendous wave of pain launch through me, somehow throwing me above Nightingale and landing on the ground, grasping at my chest. It felt as though millions of knives and railroad spikes were going through my heart.
Nighingale only grinned at this, revealing his yellow sharpened teeth, that in my opinion haven't seen a dentist in 40 years.
"My, my, my, my little pony. One does not succeed if he disposes his friends."
"Y-you're no friend of mine. GAH! And I'm already dead! This necklace won't do anything!"
"Why, it will, it will grant you ultimate power. Power to match that of the alicorn's. But when I bring you back to life that necklace will travel with you. And trust me, if you fuck with the time you have," He lowered his head to reach to my eye level. "You will die a death that will be in eternal pain and suffering!" He smiled mockingly at me. Nightingale reached a hoof to my head and pressed it on the ground creating cracks underneath me.
"You have nine years to find the cause." The ground broke entirely sending me falling into the sodom that was Equestria.
Would you say that I am wasting my time?
Would you say that I became a hero for Equestria?
I became far from it, lost in a land of death, destruction, with your friends, who were also cursed with the same curse that I have.
This world has nothing but destruction.
The Dark Ones: The worshippers of Tirek.
We are only at the beginning, the beginning of the end.
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NICEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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Oh yea, I'm interested. Can't wait to read more.
So are all of your follows getting cameos, or is it just you and nightingale?
So you've started your epic, I'm halfway through mine. Alright kid, you've grabbed my attention.
4437523 Everyone plays an important role in it, including my followers
4437564 I assume I shall take the roll of the wise old kermudgen?
Not that I'm complaining, mind you. People are reading. This wasn't a total waste of time. It's just weird.
If this is a war you need a Dragonborn of Steel! *whips out my arsenal, and locks and loads* IM READY!
Huh. Ancient cult, evil centaur, end of the world?
Nothing I can't handle.
*kicks a dagger into his teeth* Alright bitches, get ready to be blinded by the Light!
(Not expecting to have that pivotal of a role, just thought I'd say something badass
4437564
So you're including your followers in the story?
Interesting.
4437564 If we're all making appearances, I'm the hot headed follower! Emphasis on hot, cuz, ya know, fire.
4443481 I'm getting started on the next chapter
I see great potential in this story young one. Keep writing.
!
Okay. Can I design myself though? Or at least say what I wan to be like.
4443645 yep. The next chapter has Turbo's start on his journey
4443650 Woohoo! Don't mention me yet! If some war happened, I've got a damn good idea what I would be like. Never get me alone, friend. It never ends well.
4443657 Alright. This story has gotten a great time tonight though
4443657 Yeah, try not to run into you in a dark place.
4443689 Why do you think I'm on this site so often? I'm afraid to be alone. Otherwise... I'm completely accountable for what I may do.
4443701 yep, scary.
Very good start on the story, wish you luck.
You have grabbed my attention i found this to be very interesting and your adding your followers in the story to hmm i think this story is going to go far nice work turbo keep up the good work
I just need to say this.
I'm in love with the idea of having ALL your followers in this. god, it's so freaking cool!
The necklace. "SIT BOY!
4455874 The necklace is a curse, of course. But everything will be explained in time
4455880 I figured as much.
Also, if you were to...ponify me in here somewhere, you'd need a picture of my OC, no?
(sorry for all the comments)
4455887
I do.
(It's alright)
4455891 (This will be the last one for now, so you're catching a break. :D
)
th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2012/284/6/4/comission___night_flame_by_spectrum1794-d5higuq.png
I haven't really used this guy for anything yet, nor have I really worked on his origin/backstory/anything yet.
Uh...Random facts, I guess. His name is NightFlame, he's really an Earth Pony--as his wings are artificial--but he can still fly with them. Just not as good as a biological Pegasi.. He's 21, but he doesn't like drinking. His Cutie Mark is the image of a quill streaming a trail of flames along an already-written-on piece of parchment representing his quick wits and his ability for his loyal, very obedient nature to follow orders without question, and also to do everything he can to please those orders. (lol it can be a sexy situation too, if need be. He'll do it
I can't think of whatever else would be important...
This was really good!
4469459 Thanks
So good. :)
I demand to be in this story or else I will only like and not fav *giggles*
4576391 I did say all my followers
4576398 Wait, what do you mean?
4576402 that all of my followers will be in this story. It's meant to be a long story
4576414 oh, ok. I'm psychotic, extremely kind, generous and honest, homicidal and speak in the third person sometimes. Also, I call myself Xares. (For real)
Since you wrote this when you hit 60 followers, does that mean the thirty-three that followed you after this will be included in this story or is it just going to be the original 60 followers?
4673721 The next 33 will also be included as well
4673852
How will you include them? Are you going to include their OC's?
4673863 Yes. If they don't have an OC then I'll make one based on them
4674017
You never asked me for my OC.
4674151 I am going to post a blog about the OCs.
ebfiuendoiwnadwejiubfe Next Chapter now like right fucking now, I mean it like right fucking now. Take it away fluttershy.
U-um no thanks.
Fluttershy now we have to restart!!!!
4704726 Dude, calm the fuck down! I'm writing from my phone
4704731 I was just joking around.
4673852 Will I be in it? I hope so because I support the 'big' story of any writer.
The starting of this story is not bad. If you want any suggestions for a story, fill free to let me know.