Good job with this chapter. Like many others I have been dying to read what happens next. I am happy Spike got to tease them all and the fact his teasing messed with Shy as well made it all the more funnier lol. I wonder how the party will go. I bet Spike's teasing isn't done. Of course it could be the girls turn to tease back lol
4451980 Oh seeing Rarity get it will be all too funny lol. Hell they could play "Fight Truth" (A game me and me friends made up) It is when you play a fighting game the loser has to answer a question from the winner lol. It is like truth or dare but with video games lol. I want to see how flustered Rar gets. I bet it will be when Spike start to get physical with Twi or Dash as they are playing a game lol
4452122 Good idea, I had something like that planned for the next part. Hopefully it doesn't take to long to get the next part out for this story, 'cause I got a really good idea planned for the next chapter.
4452140 Then start writing now! I am dying to see them start to play and what ever craziness might come up from it. This is why I am not starting more then one story too many things to look forward to from you and not enough time in the day for you to pump them all out.
4452121 I can see this Spike feeling up Twi and Dash while playing games just to get the other girls all hot and bothered, only to tease them further with some sexy flirty words
I was reading though, and it seems you replace "and" for "any" and "an" a lot, you also do it in your comments. Places I noticed where; "Rarity isn't and exception." Should be an "an" or "any"; same with "thy could have their party without and interruptions." "They" should also have an 'e'. Sorry if this comes off as being rude. There also a few other errors, "be" being used in place of "me" and such.
4508576 Naw not right now, I'll look for one tomorrow. I damn near lost my shit when I found a Celestia and Luna cosplayers, there was also a flash sentry with them.
Exhibitionist dragon.
Good job with this chapter. Like many others I have been dying to read what happens next. I am happy Spike got to tease them all and the fact his teasing messed with Shy as well made it all the more funnier lol. I wonder how the party will go. I bet Spike's teasing isn't done. Of course it could be the girls turn to tease back lol
4451835 You'd be right, there is still some teasing left, and Rarity isn't and exception.
Spike is such a tease!
4452020 Yes, so much better then reserved Spike if you ask me.
4451980 Oh seeing Rarity get it will be all too funny lol. Hell they could play "Fight Truth" (A game me and me friends made up) It is when you play a fighting game the loser has to answer a question from the winner lol. It is like truth or dare but with video games lol. I want to see how flustered Rar gets. I bet it will be when Spike start to get physical with Twi or Dash as they are playing a game lol
4452122 Good idea, I had something like that planned for the next part. Hopefully it doesn't take to long to get the next part out for this story, 'cause I got a really good idea planned for the next chapter.
4452140 Then start writing now! I am dying to see them start to play and what ever craziness might come up from it. This is why I am not starting more then one story too many things to look forward to from you and not enough time in the day for you to pump them all out.
4452121
I can see this Spike feeling up Twi and Dash while playing games just to get the other girls all hot and bothered, only to tease them further with some sexy flirty words
Such a naughty dragon
4452159 Ya'know it!
Luneth can't wait for the next chapter
4455197 ARE YOU HAPPY NOW! HUH!? ARE YOU!? lol jk anyway thanks for liking me story and it hopefully won't take too long for the next chapter.
I was reading though, and it seems you replace "and" for "any" and "an" a lot, you also do it in your comments. Places I noticed where; "Rarity isn't and exception." Should be an "an" or "any"; same with "thy could have their party without and interruptions." "They" should also have an 'e'. Sorry if this comes off as being rude. There also a few other errors, "be" being used in place of "me" and such.
4456964 Bot being rude, you being helpful. I get those things corrected.
Spikes got game
4462505 I love Spike like that, sounds better than Spike being more reserved.
4462531
Party time ehh? I like party time.
~OreoKookie
4506559 currently at a anime con right now, I'll be back on Sunday and back to writing.
4507006
Dude, sweet, have fun there and do me a favor and high-five someone there and say, "I did for the noms!"
~OreoKookie
4507078 'Imma find a deadpool cosplayer and have them say it.
4508510
Did anyone do it?
~OreoKookie
4508576 Naw not right now, I'll look for one tomorrow. I damn near lost my shit when I found a Celestia and Luna cosplayers, there was also a flash sentry with them.
4508609
A knight with the Princesses seems rather fitting. Please get someone to do that, it would make everyone's day!
~OreoKookie
4508629 I got there picture. And it was the EQG flash sentry.
4508692 their. Lol
4508692
Dude you have to show me! PM me if you must but I must see this!
~OreoKookie