There's an Anthro tag, I suggest using it

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Duh. Totally forgot that one. Thanks for pointing it out.

This makes me very happy

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If you know what I mean

Je I knew Sketchy Changeling will do something like this, thanks for the story dude, it was good, have you 2 had plans of see if continue this alternative story line?

Do a threesome with Rarity and Octavia!

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This was only planned and commisssioned as a one-shot. Currently there are no plans to continue this story or make any other alternate endings.

But who knows. If my schedule permits it, I might be up for more.

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O perfect, lets us know if that happen, I want to see how things would had change if he had choose Rarity

That ending is perfect

So...was that ending an indication of jealousy?

Also, seriously hot story.

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No, definitely not. Remember that I didn't conceive these characters. The main story makes it quite clear that Celestia's feelings for Marcus are motherly and nothing else. I wouldn't presume to give her any romantic feelings for him.

It's more an expression of: "How the buck am I gonna explain this to his parents?"

This was excellent I'd missed your clop stories.

This was an.... Interesting read. I love MOA, its characters and its style.

This... is interesting. That's all I can really say about it. It looks and reads so similar to MOA, and because of that, any little difference between Sketchy Changeling and yourself makes it all the more glaring that this is not the MOA that I know and love.

That being said, I liked this story. It was well written and the sex came (ha ha) naturally and flowed well.

Overall, I'll give this story a like, and a recommendation to anyone who wanted this type of thing in the original My Overbearing Aunt.

Great job!

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I can just picture that conversation.

How do I put this...
Discord: Celestia didn't let Marcus go to a party, which directly led to him getting together with her sister and bopping like bunnies. They're dating now.
DISCORD!

Well it is about time you're back. I've missed your stories. Always a good read.

Sorry I'm still not done with your thing don't hate me it's almost done and you're going to love it please don't be mad i'm just really busy sorry

Her own sister getting freaky with her nephew........poor mare, that's a rough pill to swallow.

Hot diggity.

I thoroughly enjoyed this. I'll be thumbing up and favoriting.
And congrats! Your fic will now officially be the one to make my number of favorited fics surpass 50.

Very well done.

I said I was going to die laughing at the end also awesome chapter one of the best I've read. in forever

I think there should be an alternate ending where Marcus chooses Rarity over Octavia. Then clop. Lots of clop.

Its funny, my favorite pony is Luna and my name happens to be Marcus. Well, i feel

Can't stop...Laughing...

Wonder...if there would be an alternate ending to the story where on the day Marcus is supposed to confess to Rarity and Octavia Celestia stops him at the door and is like "Marcus! My Love! I can't hold these feelings any longer!" And she tells him how she's loved him since forever... something like that. Sounds hot.

Well done! I have to admit that I liked this ending! Good job!

Hm im not a fan of clopfic's and im definitely not a clopper but this was a well written story it would be awesome to see a sequel but if not that's alright. Have some moustache

The Story was quite good and the Ending was hilarious

But to be honest I was expecting a BJ in the Story, not because it's a Fetish of mine (it's his Story not mine), but lines like: "Fill up her belly with a treat or two", "Nightmare Moon will gobble you up" and “Is that a candy cane in your pocket or are you happy to see me?” really makes me think of a Scene like that.

Still an awesome Clop and I definitly gonna check out MOA

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Well, I had pretty much free reign over how the clop itself would play out. And trust me, I've considered the same reasoning you've just laid out.

But it just didn't fit from the way things were unfolding, especially with Marcus being a virgin. I didn't wanna break the mood to make a lame pun and I think that was the right decision in the end.

And I would maintain that the "gobbling up" part got its pay-off, when she bit him.

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Glad I'm not the only one who noticed this missed Opportunity (especially if it's from the Author herself), but you also got a good reason why such a Scene was missing. so I'm okay with it

Well I can't wait to read your next Commission (no matter if Clop or not) and of course News regarding my own Story

I just noticed that when Luna is doing to Nightmare Night chant, she repeats the first part rather than saying "What a fright."

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Oh, my bad then. I never noticed that the second line is actually different. But I guess it works either way.

I think I found the right art to imagine to.
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You are brilliant. The cover art is really good, the story delivers, andi2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/682/471/d3d.gif

oh yeah this story is awesome

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Thanks for the compliment on the cover art.

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Oh, you did the cover art? Great on you, then!

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Yeah, this one-shot is based on one of my stories so I figured that I could provide the cover art.

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That's so kind of you!

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I also did the artwork for two of Ranko's other stories.

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Aaaaah... I see.

This makes me very happy

4430675 I am wondering what you thought of the story?

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I freaking LOVE this story! The connection between Luna and Marcus was done really well, and I got the sense that their love for each other went beyond just sexual attraction.

Sequel?

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I'm glad that I got that across. I've always enjoyed their interactions in your story and thought that it wouldn't actually take much to get them to that final step.

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Maybe?

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If I can come up with a good idea for her to use.

Yay
Loved the story and loved this story! Honestly, a tiny nudge here and there and the original could turn into a "story with clop in it" kind of fic. But little things like this make are great, thanks for writing it!

No? Why did Celestia yell no?

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Because she takes her role as Marcus' guardian very seriously and for this to have happened right under her nose without her knowledge, constitutes a failure at least in her mind and at this very moment due to the shock.

Also as I've stated before, she'd have a hard time explaining this to his parents, especially when you consider that Luna is technically his aunt as well.

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Mind you, I don't have any doubt that the Celestia presented in MOA would eventually be very happy for both of them and supportive of their relationship. But only after that initial shock wears off.