This is not my fetish.

Ahem. It seems well written, but there's no getting around the subject matter no matter how much of a writer you are. Also I never got why people like scat: it's just.....nasty. That's my ten cents anyway.

4309633 I can't say why everybody likes it, but I can tell you that my personal enjoyment comes from the pure dominance factor in the entire thing. Sort of a "You're so below me, this is all you're good for" kind of thing. I promise that, despite popular belief, people with scat fetishes don't just like it to gross you out.

Either way, the compliment is very greatly appreciated; thank you!

this is a nice story. btw i can read this and be just fine but i cannot read full on gore

4309681 Makes sense, I guess. Personally I'd think the general offensive nature of said excrement would override any sexual excitement any of the participants would have, but then again the human race is a strange funny old beast: it's best not to question it.

,,,Why am I have a discussion about scatological intercourse? Eh, whatever.

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I like it and I look forward to the next chapter.

Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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While scat's domination/submission aspect can't be denied, for me it's just a part of a whole. "I love you so much, I love everything about you, I love even your shit and will gladly eat it" — declarations like this make anyone's brain explode with "WTF". Cute creatures doing disgusting things, aversion to excrements combined with affection to your lover who shares them with you, enjoying sharing pleasure with your lover while being tortured by the taste, sharing an intimate moment with your mouth in the most intimate place, helping relieve pressure or even constipation with the help of a most dexterous appendage, being objectified and truly serving your master, humiliation of being a mere receptacle of waste, being marked with the smell of your lover and owner... crossing social taboos, combining the uncombinable. There're SO many aspects to scat it's hard to list them all.

Watersports is the tame version of scat. Pretty much the same logic applies, but it's less extreme, the taste is nicer, it's a bit less socially unacceptable, and there're no health risks and it's easier to clean up if practiced in real life.

By the way, some people actually like the taste. And if one is aroused, perception changes significantly. On the other hand, a lot of people practicing extreme fetishes feel disgust after losing arousal (usually after cumming).

This... is wrong... I know not what demons haunt your mind, but this, this is heresy!

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4335137 As long as these demons in my mind don't screw up my English abilities, I personally have no issue with them being there.

Meanwhile, is there any particular part of the writing style or story that you dislike? I'm always aiming to improve my writing for the enjoyment of as many people as possible.

4335182 Your writing is perfect my friend... It's only your sanity that needs work.

4335192 You've got me there. But we're all insane in a way, and I prefer to keep it like that.

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For me, insanity is super sanity. The normal is psychotic. Normal means lack of imagination, lack of creativity.

Jean Dubuffet

*Trots away*

4337521 Jean was, as he said himself, insane!

foalcon? i don't see any foal characters in the list.....

4340112 There's a flashback in the story that goes back to when Rainbow Dash was a young filly, hence the foalcon part. That's the only instance of it in the whole story though.

I figured it was safer to include it than not to and risk someone getting naggy at me over it.

4340332 ah....

4660538 Running into real-life issues that are slowing my writing abilities. I am still working on chapter 2 as well as a couple of stories I need to finish after this one.