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A Rarity to come by

Fluttershy visits Rarity to ask about help finding her colt-friend. Rarity gives her an extended lesson on romance.

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Skull025

Skull025 #1 · Apr 1st, 2012 · · ·

I giggled. Thanks for the laugh. Keep the beginning and middle. If you want to write a serious fanfic you can just take this story and flesh it out. I think you're a good writer, with what I've seen here.
Stay awesome.
-Skull025

R-B-D

R-B-D #2 · Apr 1st, 2012 · · ·

It's actually a good story if you wouldn't have dedicated the last few lines to trolling

paper bag wizard

paper bag wizard #3 · Apr 1st, 2012 · · ·

that last line was funny

Starkie

Starkie #4 · Apr 1st, 2012 · · ·

I don't get the negativity you're receiving this is actually really good.
Especially the last bit.

Maybe just go through and capitalize all the under cased names.

Dan50

Dan50 #5 · Apr 2nd, 2012 · · ·

Futashy XD

TrixLicks #6 · Apr 15th, 2012 · · ·

Best ending EVAAAAAARRRR.

Jenova2

Jenova2 #7 · May 29th, 2012 · · ·

Lol classic

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