Losing a Friend

When Rainbow's best friend commits suicide, she must deals with the sorrow that follows. It is a feeling she never thought she would have.

Rated Teen for mild cursing and alcohol in the 4th Chapter.

Chapters (4)

Finding Out · 28th Apr 2014 · 375 words
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The Funeral · 28th Apr 2014 · 634 words
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Denial · 4th May 2014 · 680 words
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Anger · 16th May 2014 · 873 words
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Captain Nibbles

Captain Nibbles #1 · Apr 29th, 2014 · 1 · · The Funeral ·

Don't worry... You'll learn how to stretch one day. Plus... DABDA, nice to know educated folks are still around.

kittycake12

kittycake12 #2 · Apr 29th, 2014 · · · The Funeral ·

Thanks

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ward282

ward282 #6 · May 4th, 2014 · 1 · · Denial ·

Hiya gals! Wanna here the song I wrote for Fluttershy?" Twilight shook her head, but Rainbow nodded vigorously. "Here goes!"

here needs to be hear.

Also I'd change the format for the song. Maybe put it centralised but it could also be the way my phone puts the text as each line sweeps from left to right.

Only things I saw that bothered me, keep up the good work.

Coolmrfreeze

Coolmrfreeze #7 · May 4th, 2014 · 1 · · Denial ·

That was pretty good can't wait to read the next chapter

Write Holiday

Write Holiday #8 · May 5th, 2014 · 1 · · Denial ·

This is really, REALLY good so far. I don't really read too many stories like this, but this third chapter has me hooked now. I really love this story, and trust me when I say that the more you write, the better you get. And this is already amazing, so I really look foward to see more