uhh and By the way.... IF you dont like it, we would love to know why x3

I liked this! Although, it COULD have used a bit more build up on the storyline. But for your first FIMfic (even though I haven't published any yet ) is something I give my kudos to.

It's okay, my biggest complaint is that the format isn't always cohesive and it feels a bit hastily made.

4281780 Yes the format is a bit.. unexpected bad xD Wrote it in Gdoc. May have a tio to get rid of the bad formating ?

4281077 NomNom Thanks alot x3 Its my first Fiction over all and also in English

4282272 I suggest using microsoft word instead of Google docs if you've got it.
P.S: OH MY GOSH! You're picture is so cite, I just wanna cuddle it so hard.

4284810 Okay ! I will try ! Thanks x3