Existence

by Sir Hat

Love

Dear sister.

I love you.

Remember that.

As you return to life.

As I return all you have given me.

As I fade away

You offered everything.

But dear sister, I love you.

I will always love you.

I could have had control.

I could have had memories.

I could have had freedom.

I could have had life.

I could have existed.

But I love you dear sister.

I felt you slipping away.

I could not let you.

Dear sister.

I cannot steal from you, what was denied from me.

I may not live.

I may not be free.

I may not remember.

I may not control.

But please dear sister.

Remember.

For so long as you remember me.

I shall exist.

Dear sister.

How I love you.

How I've always loved you.

How I love dear student.

How I love dear Luna.

I only ever wanted to love.

Author's Note:

Thanks for reading

More bittersweet stories. Click link please....thank you.

Comments

[Clicker]

>Not human
>Do not want.

[Sir Hat]

4277113
Spree, deal with it.

[Clicker]

4277116 I will, bye.

[PickleSurprise]

That was very interesting. What made you want to write this?

[Sir Hat]

4277120
This yo.

[Manes]

I'm scared of that coverart. Say it won't hurt me, Sir Hat!

[Sir Hat]

4277126
But it will hurt you...stay the fuck away from it!

[Manes]

4277127 media.giphy.com/media/imj2YSOd91NAs/giphy.gif

[PickleSurprise]

4277123 That was definitely one of the more interesting flashes I've played on NG. I can see how it inspired you.

[Peacekeeper]

omg this was pretty creepy o_o

the picture you choose is perfect and the song amazing. i love midnight syndicate. like i said this felt quite unique from what im used to reading from you. very good read i really liked it. the ending was unexpected to be honest, well done.

[Europa]

Creepily well done. I can picture Celestia's alter-ego coming to life, only to quickly be smacked-back down by the elements, apologizing all the while.

[Mortal Kombat]

hooolay sheeet

[Meridian Prime]

Perfect music, awesome little game that I'd never seen before, and a wonderfully creepy story over all. A very interesting look at what Celestia's own inner demon might look like, rather than the typical 'Solar Flare' kind of deal. Solar Flare is pretty awesome, but this idea of a cancerous second personality is really cool.
Bah, I'm rambling. Basically,
4277513
^This.

EDIT: Fucking hell that cover art is terrifying

[Dash The Stampede]

Dude,
Got a link to that sweet-ass cover art?

~Dash The Stampede

[TGM]

Well damn.

[draconis72000]

Don't have much else to add, Pinkie said it best.

[The Elite Knight]

This creeps the hell outta me....
Even though this is short, it's a really great story / poem.
The instant I saw the cover photo, well.....

[WiseIdiot]

Chilling, with a bitter-sweet ending.

[Jot Notes]

Yikes, this was awesome! Probably not an ideal read while I play Zomboid, but still, a masterpiece. Great work!

[Shadow of the Night]

Wow.

I can't get the video, though. Can you find it on youtube?

[wille179]

There's probaby this awesome story happening outside their shared mind. That would be fun to write, but I don't think I could do it justice.

[Sir Hat]

4277462
But the thing is, Celestia's alter ego isn't as flamboyant as NMM, it's a more subtle, creeping, hunger that continues to grow more and more aggressive as time goes on.

Sleeper agent, is it were.

[RainbowDragon]

nope

[Sir Hat]

4278591
Yes

[Sir Hat]

4278065
It's not a video, it's a flash game called covetous

[Sir Hat]

4277612
Found it on derpibooru, but no artist was linked.

[Ferote]

Wunderbar.

[Pyra Lira]

Wow, that was... I have no words...

[Nightheart]

fucking hell.
this was one messed up read. one beautiful,tragic,frightening read.
fuck man. upvote and fave.

[Pearple Prose]

Doesn't really go far enough with the idea. A lot of empty words that are too vague to really lend the story any impact.

Still, interesting idea.

[Relative Distance]

I cri evry tim

[Serefin]

Um, yay for happy endings?